TAKE WITH WATER

A Poem

Take with water:-

 

A disslovable song

A revolving thong

A slow releasing rhythm

A mystery which cannot be fathomed

An ego thinning capsule

A multi-pack of values

Drops for an invisible ear to make it reappear

A powdered substitute for eliminating fear o>

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

A drug to combat addiction to a different drug..you've presented your concept clearly as well as portrayed yourself vividly..well done.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Dear Tai, your visits mean a lot, much appreciated :)

[Tina Kline]

I enjoyed your poem. Impressive. Very unique and different.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thank you so very much Tina!

[L.Edward]

A fine ode to dissolution. Powders...body...mind. Who needs beer anyway. Why heave upon an amber sea when stranger shores bekon.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Personally I wouldn't touch the stuff with a barge pole, I guess that a line about Beer is always going to provoke plenty of responses! Your response is so appealing , I like the idea of "heaving upon an amber sea when stranger shores beckon" a beautiful line. Thank you so very much, I hope that your weekend is going well.

[Hotwater]

Keep taking the pills!... (Holsten of course!) Cheers for the read... so different.

*bird*

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Hi there Hotwater, your comments are much appreciated!

[Jack...]

A powdered substitute for beer, now that is something to think about. Reminds me of an old Steven Wright joke, "I bought a box of powdered water, I didn't know what to add to it"

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thanks so much for your comment, Jack, I had not heard of Steven Wright or the joke that you just mentioned, thanks for informing me :)

[MOON]

Swallow it all with water. Unique perspective. Lovely write

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Nice to hear from you again Moon, thank you so much!

[Mark]

Powdered beer... why not?

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thanks for commenting Mark :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

utter nonsense but somehow makes perfect sense

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thank you for commenting :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Water is life and a great medicine. Anything wrong or bad can be taken with water to dissolve it.
Clever!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thank you so much my dear :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Sheema, this is such an unusual piece with plays on words in a spunky little poem. It allows the reader to produce their own interpretation and certainly stimulates thought.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thanks for this review John :)