WINDY WHISTLER

A Poem

Windy whistler, blew fearlessly,
through the month of October,
turbocharged, determind,
compulsive, convulsive,
piercing, pious, circulations,
howling irrepressible, tremors,
with seering late night candour,
fading dramatically, edgy,
berrating, ceasing impact,
with amplified resignation,
abrupt though remorsley
fierce, releasing a callus,
haughty, monmental, burst,
an eerie, relentless, testimony,
of stigma and respectability,
like an unabated, unanticipated,
unplanned, final verse......

Author's Note

Reviews are welcome.

Reviews

[Pax]

Intriguing!

Your impressive vocabulary my friend is really inspiring, the way you put up the words in creative manner of story telling... i see winter is coming, and i also see a person on which is connected to this strings of emotions...

very well expressed my friend...

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I so appreciate your taking the time out to review so impressively, thanks so much for this Pax, :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

very dramatic description of the Autumn wind

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thanks so much, Dr. Wood.

[SyberRose]

Very creative Sheema...I enjoy writing about the whispers of the wind...so nice to hear the wind whistler for a change ha...Enjoyed...Rose:)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I am pleased that you enjoyed and thanks so very much, SyberRose!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Hello, Sheema. I like the title...Windy Whistler.
You know wind is once my muse in my poetry. Here, you used wind as a whistler...while I used it in one of my poems as a whisperer.

Nice poem.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thanks very much Dhaye :)

[Great Aunt Astri]

What a wonderful poem! The way you have written it I can just hear Windy Whistler howling through the towns and country side. Definately my sort of poetry that I love!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Hi there, that is so kind of you, Great Aunt Astri! Thanks very much!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Sheema this poem sort of played a harmonica tune and evoked images of October gales and listening to the thrusting ebb and charge of of a winter wind.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Glad to hear this and thank you for dropping by and reviewing John!

[Sami Khalil]

I get the feeling of a late night visitor or just the moon as a visitor of late night candour. I love all your adjectives that give depth and dimension to your writes...Splendid . The title is great too...:)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Hi Sami, thank you for such a kind and generous review this morning, I was delighted to read your comments and appreciated also the motions by which you engaged, best regards :)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

See you again in November!

[Sami Khalil]

Most welcome...:)................