WINDY WHISTLER

A Poem

Windy whistler, blew fearlessly,
through the month of October,
turbocharged, determind,
compulsive, convulsive,
piercing, pious, circulations,
howling irrepressible, tremors,
with seering late night candour,
fading dramatically, edgy,
berrating, ceasing impact,
with amplified resignation,
abrupt though remorsley
fierce, releasing a callus,
haughty, monmental, burst,
an eerie, relentless, testimony,
of stigma and respectability,
like an unabated, unanticipated,
unplanned, final verse......

Author's Note

Reviews are welcome.

Reviews

[Pax]

Intriguing!

Your impressive vocabulary my friend is really inspiring, the way you put up the words in creative manner of story telling... i see winter is coming, and i also see a person on which is connected to this strings of emotions...

very well expressed my friend...

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I so appreciate your taking the time out to review so impressively, thanks so much for this Pax, :)

[Edmund S. Obumba]

you made me experience winter in tropical sub sahara..lol
You have a way with words...amazing!

[luviva]

quite dfferent from your other writes which tend to be too detailed...
This is a surpressed poem thatt carries alot.
Wonder who wistle blwer is...

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thanks for your opinions Luviva, always helpful.

[riskrapper]

aren't you glad you got that off your chest...
slammer stuff....
you go to the next round...

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thanks a million, much appreciated

[Tai Ryens]

Compelling vocabulary and I still am intrigued to the meaning of the story.. well dnoe

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thank you so much Tai

[L.Edward]

Yes, wind the great communicator. Adjective laden it is indeed. Especially when you are walking through it you feel it has a life,mind and intent all its own. You have paid fine homage to this. This has quite a literal truth to it in shamanic terms.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thank you for taking the time to write this complimentary review, I am very flattered and honoured that you should value my writing so dearly, kind wishes to you Lee.

[L.Edward]

No worries mate. Thats what its all about. Its the word. The word that you heard, its the time, its the place, its emotion. Don't ask me where that came from. It just seemed to fit the occasion. never mind me. Just chanelling lines from old cult classics. It happens during full moon usually.

[Akashi]

A very well thought out poem, you amazed me with your vocabulary.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

How kind of you to say so, Akashi, it is nice to have amazed you also, nice to hear from you, take good care and thanks so much.

[Akashi]

You are welcome, it was my pleasure to review your work.

[Hotwater]

Bright and breezy... I like how you 'crowded' the adjectives... makes a good impact. Well done to you.

*bird*

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thanks so much Hot water!

[Bobbie Coelho]

I love this poem, the description are spot on: wind is "determined and Turbocharged"

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Hi dear Bobbie, thank you very much indeed!

[Jack...]

Very cool. This one was read nicely and felt good.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thanks so much Jack.