CATCH A MYSTERY

A Poem

Catch a Mystery

 

See, catch, ..... this rotating mound of eventuality,  

whirling, cavorting around,  a chilled, Spring twilight,

a sudden, instance of, serendipity. Floating among

the Sycamore tree tops, where Starlings meet Crows

and Sparrows nest and cajole.  High beyond your

reach.  Gaze; as it drifts on to the Maples and Beech,

pursuing their mossy bark nodules, their cranky, leaves.

Watch; as, it begins to subside ungracefully, in to a

bed of blue bells and gyp.  See how it mediates, with

nettles,  laments, and sits. Watch it, close; feel it, catch;

if you can,  as it wavers,  over reacts,  and manipulates  

itself,  segregate its wealth, releases, and expands,  

 

that is,  if you can....

 

                   

Author's Note

reviews would be welcome

Reviews

[HeavenSunArcadez]

first off this was a spectacular write... and i loved it... this was a saga of hue imagery, and mastermind detail plugged into a story line/ of adventure reality and food for thought... was a great rush for mind body and soul... and definitely spirit, because it was like my brain was in the palm of my hand. the way u made me hold these thoughts (wink) anyways to me this meant that mysteries are all around us... and we dont have to search hard to find one, but we do have to analyze carefully for the less cohesive ones that take a brain scan of mind inception... but if its one word that this gives to me as a message its "explore" after all we cannot catch a mystery truly until we have understood its grasp and perhaps its purpose... amazing write Sheema! excellent work as always...your detail is mind-boggling...

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Oh beautiful, thank you so very much MR HSA for such a stunner of a review and apologies for my belated response, I will of course come by and visits when I can soon, take care :)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Excellent read and write. If only we could all see and appreciate.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thank you very much!

[Shivam Murari]

This is one really curiously beautifully written poem. After all the possible torrents of oscillatory inquisitiveness , you say "that is, if you can..." bringing the reader back to reality. Stole my heart. Very nice :-)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thank you, I appreciate, innocent manipulation with genuine, meaningful consequences, thanks also for your time.

[Shivam Murari]

:)

[David Aiello]

I did a couple of takes trying to read it back, but it shook me most cuts; maybe later in the week I'll be able to read it back to you, but at the moment just know that it's great. And it was worthy of sweatin' it trying to tape a good recording for like 20 minutes, so Rock On.
^___________^

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Cool, nice to hear from you, David.

[Introspective Mind]

the mystery leads to mystery of mind....if you can....within these three words are confined the whole of your ability....your dream...your desire....your rising hopes....your failing despairs...your promises....and...your deceits....so elegantly painted the twilight sequence of the prosperous spring with evidences of life, love, relationship, bond and the fading wings of the fleeing sun....great work, Sheema !!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

What an amazing review, I am so grateful for your eloquent interpretations, thanks very much indeed.

[Hotwater]

Good read... quite calming really, sounds like the "mind" on tour... enjoyment!

*bird*

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thanks very much Hotwater!

[Emily B]

i love the esses and mystery and spring, a homerun piece of work in my opinion

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Hey, It's great when a scorekeeper assigns points, thank you :)

[Emily B]

smiles always get extra bonus points :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A lovely read Sheema. Whimsical and thought provoking it evoked images of swirling mists until I re-read "twilight" and then breeze sprang to mind or simply someone observing nature.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thank you John!

[Peter H]

i'm thinking the mystery itself is the wind becaused its intangible one is not able to catch it .

Floating among
the Sycamore tree tops, where Starlings meet Crows
and Sparrows nest and cajole

i got something from that line i'm amazed at how many times i had to research some of the things you positioned into this piece lol , hmmmmmmmm but the mystery of the word play is enigmatic to me i can only deduce that you are somehow speaking of the congruity of the winds within the twilight or the wind itself . this is an excellent write it reminds me of my literature studying days , i would spend an hour trying to decipher all the meanings within a piece lol great and profound work right here my friend lovely write

[SHEEMA HUQ]

And may the mystery continue to baffle you, thanks a million, my friend

[patricia]

love the style in this little masterpiece and definately one for my library.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Gosh, thanks Trish, so much