UNSEEING HEART

poem

If only life were as simple

 as ‘a walk in the park’,

when addressing matters

 of one’s sullen heart,

traipsing, while thinking,

tempered by the humid

scent of Birch bark, in

itinerant idleness,

unsheathing the

unwrought residue of

vehement pontificating,

eyes are swollen, heavy,

they weep and twitch

with the strong  gust,

eyes feel worn and weary,

they squint at the very

thought of  ‘must...of must, must’

eyes become awakened

when the mind soothes

the unseeing  heart

with  reassurances  to  trust

 

 

Reviews

[HeavenSunArcadez]

The way life is we all go through trials and tribulations... and sometimes those very wisp sent our way are a test, to get us to another level on life, cause perhaps we will need to strengthen in some areas that are necessary for us to better ourselves... the important fact to always take to mind and heart is that life is filled with surprises, and unorthodox unpredictability .... however just as theres seasons in weather there are seasons in our lives.. and sometimes we shut down due to a particular event occurring in our lives... but as long as theres that faith.. inside the heart and glint of light when happiness is yet a whisper away... u summed it up perfectly

"eyes become awakened

when the mind soothes

the unseeing heart

with reassurances to trust"

another incredible write... much kudos to you

[SHEEMA HUQ]

"however just as theres seasons in weather there are seasons in our lives.. and sometimes we shut down due to a particular event occurring in our lives... but as long as theres that faith.. inside the heart and glint of light when happiness is yet a whisper away... u summed it up perfectly"

Thank you, your comments are deeply appreciated :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thoughts and moods do change with the winds that blow against us with the harshness of life.
no life is no walk in the park...but then parts of it can be...and there is beauty and serenity to be seen and had....guess we wouldn't appreciate the walks as much without the bad stuff happening also...there are those rainy days when we stay inside ourselves.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

thank you so much for stopping by and commenting

[Sami Khalil]

This one went into my faves dear poetess. I think you have done a marvelous job here...Pen on...:)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thank you sooooo much, SAMI

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure ...Any time...:)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

soothing..........excellent write.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thank you , lovely to befriend you, and for your precious time Neva

[Tai Ryens]

Do thoughts often magnify themselves on everyday walks in the park? It sure seems like it, and I take your poetry as a sort of reference to destiny. How nothing is a coincidence, but is fate itself speaking in tongues.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Yes dude, kind of, I was writing in terms of moving on and enabeling change, , which aint always straightfoward, though after some decent kip, I cherish such notions, thanks so much for popping over chuck

[SHEEMA HUQ]

would help if I wasn't bad typist

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

I love how you bring your thoughts to life. Alas, I being me feel life is as simple as a walk in the park. I also look to nature to answer the most bewildering of questions. lol, thats just who I am. You are a wonderful writer.

"the mind soothes

the unseeing heart

with reassurances to trust"

Just wonderful!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Melody, I am so grateful for your time, thanks for such praise, and the day to day events /relationships of life alter with the wind, best

[demureminds]

This seems like a constant battle of decision-making on love to me... and again I love the way you use such descriptive words. Great piece (:

[SHEEMA HUQ]

actually on relationships and balance in general, just reflections on busy, bussling earlier ons, thank you so much