oh no!!! it too long for my attention span !! A.D.D. attacks again. I will read it again when I have more time. I need to remember to breath when I read, ' cause a long piece almost causes me asphyxisation (sp?) OK fine, Ill try reading it again..
OK, so boy Harper escaped, right? for all my multiple direction in my poetry, I am kind of a literalist when it comes to understanding others... So he escaped, is that correct? I must sound dumb..
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
thanks anyway Paul for dropping by, for most this is not an expecially long composition yet I certa.. read morethanks anyway Paul for dropping by, for most this is not an expecially long composition yet I certainly relate to what you are saying, I actually considered this one to be rather elaborate aswell! I do prefer you upload shorter pieces but alas this is not always possible
11 Years Ago
I hope it is okay to say what I think. I do think you are really good at this and would like to hel.. read moreI hope it is okay to say what I think. I do think you are really good at this and would like to help... I also like to make fun of myself from time to time..
terrific tale expertly woven......but PLUMS....not PLUMBS......easy to do
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
oh thanks, and terrific of you to stop by with such a wonderful review, thanks also for pointing out.. read moreoh thanks, and terrific of you to stop by with such a wonderful review, thanks also for pointing out the 'plums' error Dr Wood
thank you Sheema
for shining your art on this very dismal subject
nice story telling
a witness to liberation...
Ya Mon...
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Hi riskrapper, yes indeed a traumatic subject, and perhaps the poem prompts questions about boy harp.. read moreHi riskrapper, yes indeed a traumatic subject, and perhaps the poem prompts questions about boy harper's on going welfare, I'm pleased you liked this one and thanks for your great comments