A FAIR ATTEMPT

abstract art poetry

 

amateur,

fine point,

fastidious,

flamboyant,

obscuring

the

outer form

with a

sparsely

developed,

unpractised

style,

depicting

a lurid,

deferential

three

quarter

length

pro

fi

le

.

 

Reviews

[Reeti]

this is also known as a 'pattern poetry'. i'm surprised to find your subject versed so tersely and intricately. not only has the description of an 'amateur' been made enticingly but, the picture deriving from the words with varying syllables is also artistic. from my perspective, i see the exterior of a lady on your verse. it might be meant to reflect a female character with crude self-growth. i wonder if my eyes have deceived me.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Hi Reeti
I'm really flattered that you should stop by and comment and I'm pleased that this little number has indulged you
much thanks

[Dr. Wood ?]

unusual and quite stunning, I must give this a try sometime it never hurts to experiment

[Cherrie]

You are really good at giving a complete image with fragments of thought.
I enjoy this style of writing. It gives momentum to a piece and lets the readers mood fill in the details.

[Sami Khalil]

I love experimentation as there is nothing wrong with that. We are all trying to hone our craft and be excited as I'm by your poetry...:)............

[Paul Seaman]

i really like lurid three-quarte length profiles

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thank you so much Sir Paul

[Edmund S. Obumba]

simple..clear..
Shows a pretender trying to cover up ones real personality
..?
I like this:-)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

ha ha,I think your'e right, or at least a nervous begginer's efforts, very nice of you to drop by and comment Edmund

[lee von cleef]

beginner luck

[SHEEMA HUQ]

as opposed to effort, plus inaite talent?
besides this was just one of those ones which appeared from knowhere

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This was very interesting and I have written a couple of 'shape' poems purely by chance. Not sure I could do it by design as it takes imagination so well done

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I think you are very good at shape poems actually
thanks for the encouragment John
pleased that you enjoyed!