POCKET RESOURCES

In his right pocket,

 

he carried an energy socket,

a debt deactivating device,

a disposable, morality transfuser,

a map of Utopia,

a cold-heart heater,

a return ticket to sanity,

and a frustration spray repellent

 

 

In his left pocket,

 

he carried some anti-sarcastic pills,

a, Statesmanly, nostril hair trimmer,

as festering-stress, sponge absorber

whatever was in his head,

plus, everything he had never said

 

 

In his outer right coat pocket,

 

he carried an inflatable park bench cushion

and a, Freedom from Gimmicks manual

 

 

In his bag,

he carried nothing at all

 

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Oh wow! rarely i can love a poem so much, its really so original with hint of fantasy-mind, so deep thoughtful, detailed...Great! I loved the idea to carry "map of Utopia and cold-heart heater! :) sooo sweetly said! and i loved the end, with empty bag ,why should he fill it too, he is so much full already :)
no♥r ~

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thanks for your lovely thoughts Nina, and it is so gratifying to read that you engaged so deeply with this particular poem, I feel really flattered, thanks again.

[L.Edward]

Yeah, this was great. A classy play on device and self help addiction. A candidate for Technologists Anonymous no doubt.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Ha ha, I really appreciate your input, thank you so much :) Have a great day

[Frieda P]

HOLY! You knocked me over with this one....where do you get 'anti sarcastic pills' by the way, great line! They're all great but that one made me smile! :D

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Hi Frieda,
That's such an awesome thng to say, thanks so much.

[Frieda P]

:-D

[demureminds]

I really enjoyed this one! Very creative and thoughtful write (:

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Big thanks, Melinda :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That was quite an amusing and unique write... to me it sounds like someone who had plenty of material things but no worth in the heart or mind.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Nice one, thank you

[Distant horizons]

Puts my lighter, packet of gum and three year old rail ticket to shame. Beautiful and original write.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Pleased to meet you, Just Lorry and thanks for commenting :0)

[luviva]

just wow.... i dont knw wt to say!!!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Nice to meet you, thank you for your review

[Muse]

anti-sarcastic pills?

umm...I ran out of those..know of any doctor who can do refills?

LOL...for being unique. 100/100

[SHEEMA HUQ]

That's really good of you to comment Muse, me thanks you.

[Harley (arbiter)]

This was a great, well written poem! Very nicely done. I liked the descriptions. Good job!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Very nice of you to say so Arbiter

[-GB-]

Awesome..what perception..i have never written abt a 'he' but this just inspired me.

I surely need those anti-sarcastic pills :P

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thanks GB, i'm pleased that we have met this evening

[-GB-]

Trust me am loving your words so much..the greater pleasure is mine. :)

Nidaa.