NIGHT

THE DARK BLUE ROBE,

COVERING THE SKY;

LITTLE WHITE SPARKLES GLOWING IN HER MIND

TRYING TO FIND....

 

BROKEN PIECES FROM THE PAST

GLITTERING IN HER EYES

PUTTING TOGETHER PARTS OF HIS MIND

REMEMBRANCE OF THE PAST

 

LOVING THE PREVIOUS LIFE

IS TORTURING THEIR HEARTS

CRYING FOR THE COVER OF THE NIGHT

RUMBLING THROUGH THE SKY

 

WONDERING WHAT WILL HAPPEN

HOPING THERE IS A LIFE

SOMEWHERE OUTSIDE THE DARK BLUE SKY

CHASING THE PRESENCE OF THEIR HEARTS

Reviews

[Ron]

Some of it I found confusing. Some lines seem forced in. Yet the subject material is good. Some ofthe work a joy to read. I think it needs more work. There is talent in this writer.