Pain Pill Orgasm

Pain Pill Orgasm

A Poem by Shane Patrick
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Little Darker

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Stand on the edge of insanity and stare into the abyss
it lends itself to you.. the pain in my body
click or tap on the bottle
heal thyself...
A shoulder to lend?

Slide pass my tongue down my throat
pain eases from my joints
relaxation
shake the bottle any-more?
feel better now, as the clouds set in

twist the cap on my ale
down again the same path
add to my relaxed state
lean back remember the bodies bloody bath
fade away those eyes who prick me like needles sharp

know not boundaries whether it be friend or foe
drink again for my mouth waters
cloudy the light in the dark..
Free does my will feel..
Think of her legs wrapped around me.. Hard and eager I am to see
the look on her face.. orgasms pain.. linger her smell on my lips and tips

go back in time so that I can live glory youth
road.. path... journey all mine.. here or then
faded that man young and virile.. I want him back
sleep today tomorrow soon, another foggy day meaningless drivel..
Pain pill save my day tomorrow too.

© 2008 Shane Patrick


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This is just plain good writing. I love it. It's honest and open, but not bogged down by fancy imagery just for the sake of fancy imagery. I think it gives a good look into a world we might not all see normally, or understand. But it makes sense to me!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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I challange thought and perception... I hope... I write because it is my passion... I also do not fall under a "genre"...I try to write a little bit of everything it all depends on my mood... questio.. more..

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