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caution: this is a poem written in rhemanglitch. and there are like 10 people who can speak it. but i love how it looks... so... here it goes.

lov'e, detfitch ne moi luki
fren'jui oinomin
leminji lopin
ke li'noi iitchi

(love, detatchment from reality
freindships unknown
leaving old times
for the brand new)

he-limein hevii onime
ke hei'veni me caxon
juiin o noki han ve detchkii
hemi hooli
kevian

( only he can know
who has my whole heart
joined me in my connection
holding tight
keep me)

fre-onii jui ke guinopi
nuimoi kuuni'detch

(freindships last a lifetime
numbers are empty in years)

bio lov'e dizt hav-ijui

(but love is happiness forever)

vei koine ve kietch voim

(when you find the right one)

Author's Note

t'vien kio
thank you

Reviews

[Shane]

Romantic...very. and a subtly abstract word construction too. Well, i guess "beautiful" is the word to describe it, but i use that word too often, and i would hate to describe this peice witha cliche - that would be sacrilege.

Also, thanks for reading my work. i might post a couple of romantic poems myself after reading this.

Cheers,
Shane.

[Penny Ellen]

It might look good in German, too (which is what I thought it was at first glance, and then I read your comment.)
I liked it.

[Lorraine Pearson]

I enjoyed the interpretation of this write very much. Its a sweet piece...and seeing this unknown lingo makes it a bit intriguing!
~Lorraiyne