Dinner Date

What would you do,

if during the middle of our conversation

about school or the economy,

I stopped.

I moved a little closer.

I took your palm in mine and examined every line, and shape.

 

What would you do

if I brought your palm to my lips and kissed it

slow and soft;

if I leaned into your body--all lean and man

and laid my head against your shoulder.

 

What would you do,

If I looked up, fire in my eyes

and

kissed a path up your jawbone

to your cheek;

to each corner of your mouth.

 

What would you do,

if I leaned in

eyes closed

and kissed you.

Tentative first--

little nibbles

and then…

powerful, passionate, releasing a lifetime of pent-up emotion?

 

What would you do if I told you

I’ve never been kissed?

 

Reviews

[Amit Parmessur]

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[china]

This is so full of passion, thank you for sharing this beautiful moment.

[Cassie316]

This is cute!! It totally reminds me of my first kiss. I'm pretty sure you just captured what everyone thinks when they've never been kissed. I like this piece, A LOT!!! Favorite one I've read all day!

[Abbie]

this is a good write very passionite and full of love