POISON

it burns through my vains

POISON  

 

i feel it flowing through my veins

tainting my insides

eating away at my soul

the deadliest of poisons

 

Its the greatest deceiver

the double edged sword

it takes you to heaven

only to bring you down to hell

 

It is love  

 

The word no longer has permanent meaning

it dies the more people use it

its a short term euphoria

an alliance of convenience

 

I gave my heart

I gave my soul

I gave my all

and now im in free fall

 

It betrayed me

it forgot me

im a distant memory

a dying breed

 

It has taken a toll on me

this love or so it would seem

im no longer my self

just a twisted shell a shadow of my former being

 

I cant get it out of my system

it tortures me so

it is a part of me

a part of my soul

 

i want it gone

its pain is too great

it is a parasite afflicting my being

The poison of my life

Author's Note

i need to reveiw it some and edit it but no grammar corrections please

Reviews

[Orlando Murcia]

I know this feeling
I felt every ounceof pain in this piece
aswell as the anger that was portrayed in hurt

Great write

Thank you for sharing this

Orlando

[Mercury Mirrors]

Love is a total poison -_- the weird part is it doesnt even exist anymore yet people r constantly hurt by it. Its like a malignant ghost...Just wants to hurt people long after its lost its soul. ^^ Great description tho.