Part Two: What is your motive?

the next part of the series.

Part Two:

What is your motive?  

 

As a man of logic this perplexes me

All of the reasons that one would need to leave 

Just arent true with you and me 

Thus i am led to ask  

 

What is your motive?  

 

I never hit you

I never forgot you

I never went without you

I never left you

 

I always said i loved you

My actions always portraid it

I always put you first 

Just ask my freinds theyll tell you. 

 

You did hit me

You did forget me

You did leave me

So i must ask with all the facts presented... 

 

What is your motive?

 

 

 

Author's Note

same thing opinions and comments not grammar teachers.

Reviews

[chris]

her motive is to be in a relationship with someone who treats her right and fufills her, that person isnt you and never will be so for our sake GET OVER IT it will be a year november 26 its time to let go, and in your writing "her" dont you ever think about calling me a pothead druggy stoner who has no money or a job or a future because it sounds a lot like your brother

[Succubi]

this is a good follow up to the last poem...love is blind, and here in this poem, your tone proves that love is decieving...

[Mariana Silva]

The common perplexity of relationships...you do well to potray the relationship objectively and also, you keep it with a curious tone as opposed to a bitter one. Good job on that, it was a great extension on your last poem.