Sensible

That makes sense

Words and the meanings

Stars and their connections

I see the pain fix this puzzle

But where are the other cards?!

That makes sense

all I had to do was to break the piano!

And no one can ever play this melancholy!

Reviews

[Lola]

loved the use of meaning, i'd rally like to know what was really the meaning behind this piece?
- Lola

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

It feels like life is incomplete without the pain. Just like a meaning to the words..
But do I deserve this pain? I dont think so....
I want to kill the pain. But it isn't so easy. How about breaking the piano? Then I cant play the melancholy. But I have to sacrifice other emotions for that. And that means death to me.

[Trevor Barnett]

The epiphany we have that everything is the same. A great write!

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

Thanks for your time Trevor!

[Dayran]

We play soccer in a field and ping pong on a table. The game and the environment tend to be one and the same. Nice ...

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

Thanks for the review Dayran.

[Coyote Poetry]

'all I had to do was to break the piano!
And no one can ever play this melancholy!"
I don't know. Braking the piano, it could stop the melancholy. Nice use of words. Made my old mind think too hard this morning. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

Its just my last hope to kill the pain...Let me see if it works..
Thanks for your review and the valuable time.

[Saddam]

A melancholic piece but sensual piece .....
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[SANDEEP SHETTY]

Thank you ssad.

[kublakhan27]

I was totally intrigued by this piece, especially the piano bit at the end...it sent me back to the beginning and lots of different meanings came to mind...well done :)

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

Thanks a lot for the review...means a lot to me