INTO THE DARKNESS

dedicated to you, glitch....

I am looking into the darkness

It is so dark out here

Lights and cheers everywhere, yet I find it dark.

It’s a matter of a moment and it will be gone

Pain has this pleasure to stand by my side

Looks like it is ready to engulf without disdain

I know it is the same with you but I don’t know why you don’t bother

After all it is just a wish that wouldn’t  come true

Or maybe it will!

Until then I keep looking into the darkness

Waiting for my light to take its flight!!!!

 

Reviews

[Avinash]

It is a nicely written poem which is making even darkness look beautiful

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

yeah...darkness can act both the ways...ugly and beautiful...thanks for reading!!!

[prodicallife]

Dear Sandeep,

That is a star rated write. Let me congratulate you with that first.

A small thing I would request you, let the fonts be gentle, size is a bit large.

How about a metaphor, let the fonts be small yet high on emotions. I much appreciate the thought, the assurance that you have depicted in the poetry for the partner to feel the same with a sudden flick to unsurety.

I much appreciate that beautiful write.

Keep up the great write.

Stay blessed!!
Prodical

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

thanks for this review...i didn't really expect that people will love this...but....thanks!!!

[prodicallife]

You are young, aspirant.

And a great write.

Keep writing great!!
read moreYou are young, aspirant.

And a great write.

Keep writing great!!

Stay blessed
Prodical

[Odysseus Wanders]

Great poem. Its moves me in feelings close to home. What and which 'darkness' has consumed my gifts of life... many, for me... teachers, a father, a mother, and more... the world even at times... i feel, has sought to consume, all of my light, my heart. And a great part of my life and its energy has been to 'know' the darkness that has swallowed it... and i chase it down, i follow it into the hole or the cave, to where it is held captive... pain too. Some of us, simply, just have more to be pained about then others... and to listen to those who dont(have such pain), about how to get ones light back, is, useless for me... for i learn to trust my own inner light, and my own inner darkness, as the guides for me and only me... "Lights and cheers everywhere, yet I find it dark." This line is gold. Pure gold. It points the direction for me, it is the line, the beginning, of the journey that will one day take me home.
Beautiful writing here Sandeep!

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

thanks a lot James....from the review i can see that you understood my feelings thoroughly!!!!!!!thanks for reading...

[icelandicblue]

Wishing upon a star during holidays and celebrations while everyone else is busy looking at twinkling lights. You are alone among the throngs of people. Your star stares at you through the pitch blackness but you are no nearer now than before. The holiday passes, the artificial lights are gone, the wish does not come true and you discover the darkness has always been your companion, will always be your companion while you wait for that light no matter how long it takes, but maybe the light is you and all you have to do is step out of the darkness, I know the darkness won't mind, he'll just become your shadow while you walk in the light.

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

yeah....even i wish to come out of the darkness.....thanks for stopping by....

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

i cant explain this...if you can please....