INTO THE DARKNESS

dedicated to you, glitch....

I am looking into the darkness

It is so dark out here

Lights and cheers everywhere, yet I find it dark.

It’s a matter of a moment and it will be gone

Pain has this pleasure to stand by my side

Looks like it is ready to engulf without disdain

I know it is the same with you but I don’t know why you don’t bother

After all it is just a wish that wouldn’t  come true

Or maybe it will!

Until then I keep looking into the darkness

Waiting for my light to take its flight!!!!

 

Reviews

[xMiss_Psychosis_Phantom..]

Please do not take this as an offense, but I thought it was kind of cute. It was very nice and I enjoyed it. :)

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

Thanks a lot Quill...glad you liked it!!!

[Sami Khalil]

A good dedication...Bravo.................

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

Thank you.... :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:0.................................

[Trevor Barnett]

A very nice write Sandeep.

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

thank you Barnett

[Dayran]

The light comes from the darkness ... its the flight you expect when you see the light in the dark. Good work Shetty.

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

thanks for stopping by Dayran

[Author Steve Downes]

very good, excellent work

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

thank you steve!!!

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is a really excellent poem.I really enjoyed it:)

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

Thanks for reading...Vidya!!!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[SAYED THANGAL]

I consider this as a spiritual poem, a lot to think about, very good
sayed

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

Thank you for the review sir....

[Coyote Poetry]

A well written poem. You brought me in and I wanted more. I like the thoughts and feel of mystery in the words. Some people can lead us to the light and happiness if we open the door. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

thanks for the review Coyote...you reviews always bring a huge smile as my friend says!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Praveeta]

Beautifully crafted poem. Thanks for sharing.

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

thanks praveetha...

[Praveeta]

You are welcome.

Praveeta

[Ahena MK]

beautifully written loved the read but a humble suggestion.... lower the font size a bit that would make a lot of difference...
lovely writing and wonderfully crafted
ahena

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

yeah...i was in a hurry to upload the poem...so didn't check the font size...thanks for the review...ahena..

[Ahena MK]

That's no big deal... You can anytime change that... But I got to say.... The poem was supercalifrajilisticspalidoshes!!!! Which means it was awesome
Keep writing
Ahena

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

thanks a lot ahena.... :)

[Ahena MK]

welcome :)