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He wants to buy me chocolates,

those from belgium which just sort of melt in your mouth

and an engagement ring(may be a year or so later)

one with a huge Amethyst,my birth stone

and a car on lease

(just imagine me with my very own car)

 he wants to get me all of this

and me,i keep on hankering for just a reason to live....

Reviews

[Jasmine]

The last line makes this - I'm sure you know that.
You're very clever.

[paul]

ah, beautiful.
flows well.
last line makes the poem.

[Robin]

such a poet , with an eye for so much more

[SOUL LESS]

lol...the last line explains the point of writing the poem. But it will lead to you losing the reason to live because things fall apart...and then you want have a life anymore. And you'll be simply...existing. Then perhaps you'll find another reason and try to prolong that as well. :)

[Emily B]

what he wants and what she wants

find what you really want . . . don't settle for chocolates or a car