for Allah

As if in a deja vu

i have come back to you

when the dark eyed women  told me

You are a recurring phenomena

and i'm unclean...

i have nothing to offer

except for my right to think and speak

I cuckolded you last year

sorry for that,lets shake hands,

make me feel a little less dead...

Reviews

[Another Relic]

Excellent as always. You always leave us with some kind of emotion in your poems and this is no different. Great last line. I'll enter my usual 100 in the ratings box which almost seems unnecessary. all your poems are 100.

[Khaaki]

You are alive Sahar... stagnancy is death of the mind and heart... and your thoughts gush... Brilliant... encore encore encore...

[Jibey]

So hard to escape, He is always there

[OT]

you always have these huge lines in your poems - all of the words are perfectly selected but there's always a few that leave me nodding and I remember them when i leave - here "make me feel a little less dead" and "you are a recurring phenomena and I'm unclean" - brilliant of course

[Emily B]

I've been missing you, sweet girl