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im a bit out of it...

frat house

keystone induced nausea

on someone's couch whom you dont know

someone with a dangling epsilon pie theta penis

 incapable of seeing the faces

you have nothing to do with faces

even the sofas have effaced themselves

and you suddenly become a philosopher

eyeing everyone who has got creative

after the second round of Amphatemines,

someone below that greek lettered window is painting something.

Amun-Ra he called it,

i suddenly realise its not important for things to make sense at all

and our most attractive feature perhaps

is our innate decadence

which we show when we shed our couture...hypocrisy

naked as the day we were born

here we are celebrating something

its not significant anymore that i dont know

what it is

but i'm happy coz i feel like living again

as if i'm back home

Reviews

[Siddhartha]

Your work straddles that that fine line between risque and art...And does that with flair and brilliance..
This particular work again rises out of of adolescence indulgence with resilience and grit...

[paul]

penis line is great.
and the second 'faces' line

lots to think about in this poem.
beautiful ending

[Khaaki]

You are my favorite... I am dumbfounded again... Firm thoughts that flow effortlessly... penetration of human nature at its very best...

[abhas]

i read and i smile...and i nod... and wonder how profound it is... may be the amphetamines help... or may be provide just the threshold energy so that you can explode... great write...

[Emily B]

you are the best poet I know

[Robin]

"i suddenly realise its not important for things to make sense at all
and our most attractive feature perhaps
is our innate decadence
which we show when we shed our couture...hypocrisy"

You have this ability to dissect human nature in the most poetically profound manner . an amazing piece my friend.

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[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Well said.