A toilet poem for you,babe
A Poem by Alicante lullaby
Go to your wife
Pry her thighs
And then think about me.
© 2011 Alicante lullaby
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. ah, infidelity ... so very removed from love it is ... brilliantly written ...
Posted 13 Years Ago
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oh my my lol
love it!
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Why 'toilet' poem? The rest rings a bell
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Haha, ever the clever girl you are. Sometimes I simply don't know what to say when I read your poems. The feelings I get are stronger then the words I know. I guess that's why I always give you a hundred.
Posted 13 Years Ago
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haha!!!! nice!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
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I love how you swing your cutlass ~
Posted 13 Years Ago
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.......wow.......
I really mean that. WOW.
Listen, short as it is, this has to be the most...potent...piece of work I have ever set eyes upon. Really. You've...shocked me. I don't know why I'm shocked, and it's a profoundly disturbing feeling, shock...but I'm floored by this. Very well done.
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Added on February 13, 2011
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