Are you Human?

Are you human?

Do you feel?

Can you see? 

Will you heal?

If I drink

from you pond

Will you shudder?

Will you respond?

The stiff and still

The wild and wet

Your sour aroma

the soot and sweat

I breach the threshold

the sweet embrace

The nectars flow

through time and space

The slim slender limbs

The small tender face

Everything as it should be

Everything in place

Are you human?

Do you love?

Will you have me?

I am enough? 

Reviews

[Nicole]

I really like how this flows, fantastically done!

[marie]

good job with the imagery, i like the rhyme scheme, you shined through in this:)

[Santiago Veracruz]

Thank you very much.

[marie]

No problem

[writingcrazy55555]

A fantastic poem! Great job, nice use of rhyme scheme and repitition! Excellent work.

[Davey Jones]

Nice and I get your drift when I read this poem