Abyss

I awake in the abyss, no light, no sound, only destitution. I let the darkness envelope me, and enter every crevice and crack till it has completely consumed it's prey. 

Reviews

[writingcrazy55555]

Excellent poem, nice descriptions and nice use of vocabulary! Nice work :)

[Davey Jones]

very nice word to explaine what a abyss looks like

[BLBrown]

This poem is abstract and yet the meaning, which I believe to be someone wanting to disappear from life, is clear. Using words like "abyss" and "darkness" are effective as a means of relating despair. And the willingness to be gone is profound. Short, powerful and good.

[Darksummerswind]

A dark poem with a few words yet it has a lot of emotion and a clear message.