Despair

Pathetic
Worthless

Why do you even live?
Just get it over with.
You think that little pathetic hope you cling
Onto will help you feel better?

Look around you.
Look at yourself.
Disgusting.

Listen to me
I know you better than anyone.
I am despair that has invaded your life.
I will grow and fester till you can't live with out me

I will make you love me

Till death do us part.

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

Very sinister and dark. I think Despair would say exactly those things as it slowly takes over someone's life. I really like this. Great job on it.

[_mal]

Absolutely loved the line break on
'You think that little pathetic hope you cling
Onto will help you feel better?'
Makes me want to read it over and over. This one wasn't as strong to me as some of your others though, I think it might just have been that last line because I really love the idea in this and it's one I can really relate to

[Sukriti Suki]

It has a shocking, loving, despise element to it...I like it.