Read eyes

A love sick trying to express his/her love. Poetic style attempted: Cinquain

My love,

For thee can’t die;

Feelings for thee are high,

Words can’t express this emotion;

Read eyes.

Reviews

[Connie MaryN]

Well,I think I like it but seems very short like something more could be said.anyway it was a good attempt keep writing.

[Shankar Mohan Singh]

Thanks for reading, this is Cinquain it has a restriction of five lines with syllable count 2,4,6,8,2. :P

[Connie MaryN]

The style is really strange I've never heard of it yet,guess I am learning it from you.It was a good idea to share one of this style I've learnt.

[Shankar Mohan Singh]

Anytime thanks:)

[Adesanya Yewande]

Lovely poem,but the style of poem is strange to me,red eyes. but it is a good write up

[Shankar Mohan Singh]

This cinquain for you five line poem with syllable count 2,4,6,8,2

[Shankar Mohan Singh]

Anyways thanks for feedback

[Adesanya Yewande]

Thanks also for making me learn a new poem style from you

[Shankar Mohan Singh]

You're welcome :)

[Autonomous]

The style is a bit weird but I can't judge that, the write was good but the style is not something I personally like.

[Shankar Mohan Singh]

Thanks for the feedback:)