Life

A Love-sicks who seeks life in the eyes of beloved.

Let me sink,

In deep eyes of thee;

For I don’t long for shore,

Escaping the escape, to be wanderers of yours

Reviews

[Antoñyo]

Very well done. "For I don't long for shore" is just a brilliant BRILLIANT line, set to a beautiful surrounding.
Just an awesome piece.

Thanks for the share.

[Shankar Mohan Singh]

Thanks for taking your time, yeah that line some what define true love sick

[Sami Khalil]

A good acrostic on life. Bravo, sir,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

[Shankar Mohan Singh]

Thank you so much

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...)..................

[EssenceofDaringx]

Hey, nice poem! Definitely digging the structure here! The only part that bothered me was in the last line where you say: "Escaping the escape...". What do you mean by that??

[Shankar Mohan Singh]

Well thats where it digs deep, escaping the escape means the person no longer wish to escape from being submurged. Life long wandering in deep eyes of beloved :) Hope I made some sense

[Autonomous]

Great, I like the way you use this structure (I always forget what its called) to convey your feelings of love. Keep up the good work

[Shankar Mohan Singh]

That's the acrostic for you, it can be done either at the beginning, middle or at the end the whole poem should revolve around the structure. Thanks for taking your time and such kind words.