My addiction

Shes a keeper

Makes me want to dive into her arms deeper

Her smell sweeter than any flower

Her eyes i get lost in, stronger than any power

Her body shaped to perfection

Her heart is my connection

I can't live without her loving hug

She's my addiction, better than any drug

Reviews

[DarkShines]

Very good. I like that even though it's fairly short, you can still find a good story within it.

[lil lisa]

sounds like "love" if only we could all be able to tell people we love things like this everyday. u r great. reaching god through drugs is only beat by doing it through love.

[Sukriti Suki]

I like the rhyme here....simple nice write.

[SilentVerses]

Short but elegant, with rhymes that aren't forced and allow the simple fluidity to shine through the meaning within the depths, sweet but bitter undertones of a passionate desperation. Like it.