Poetically Me

They can't answer
to them it's like cancer
yet I can't complain
not meant to feels this way
drifting in this void
thoughts I long to avoid
alone
for all these I atone
this I provide:
passion latent lips
expressed through fingertips
soul filled with fire
heart races with desire
at this hour
met with such power
frustrating sighs
I come to realize
by no rules I abide
secrets seep from deep inside
all you have to do is read between the lines

Reviews

[Sapphire Balasquez]

you have a very interesting style I've noticed, you're often introducing what you're about to say in your poetry. I do like that style, try to mix it up sometimes. ^^ this is good! i like the whole "so deal with it" attitude that kinda kicks through. watch out for the rhythm, i like your word choice, keep it up! ^^