Sweet Simplicity: It's What You Do To Me

Sweet simplicity
you next to me
as all ceases to be
we become truly free
cannot help but stare
beauty beyond compare
a great temptation
taken with no hesitation
like a pill
pain to kill
a prescription
to end conviction
esoteric meeting
enthralled with meaning
eyes hazy
find myself thinking more lately
I will make you believe
soon you will see
etched in destiny
it's been awhile
a simple confession
in the form of a smile

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esoteric meeting
enthralled with meaning
eyes hazy
find myself thinking more lately
I will make you believe
soon you will see
etched in destiny
it's been awhile
a simple confession
in the form of a smile

i absolutely adore. especially these. you made it so clear. in the beginning the readers unsure quite of what is being read, but then, miraculously, progress is made and upon the rereading, insight is given and we are totally in sync with what youre thinking. we've all been there. i like how you mention, casually of course, how long its been, and how thats sort of effected things. time does that. time does NOT heal all, but im sure you get the point.