Day in the life.

Day in the life.

A Poem by .

Sitting alone full of discontent,

lacking meaning.

Scribbling down all thoughts that pass through his mind.

Thinking about oh so much yet oh so little.

Criticizing everything he thought, 

full of unhappiness.

Yet the happiest in a long time.

© 2009 .


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awesom poem xD

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ironically beautiful. Great write, I really enjoyed it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this.
Maybe its the contradicting ending, I don't know, but I like this.
Seriously.

Yours truly,
cloud6

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Life is full of irony. There is so much surprises even in little things. And, that makes life so interesting.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This peom tells so little yet so much. Simple words can create a powerful meaning. Iv'e felt the feeling too, ur happy but u feel unhappy at the same time. Great Job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great write!
I don't doubt that many can relate
best wishes,
Elyssa

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

simple and yet complex. interesting.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah.
This one is also short & I also like this one a lot.
Sometimes I feel like I've spent my entire life like that;
Spaced out, writing down all of the passing thoughts, criticizing them & than being so unhappy that I'm almost happy about it.
Great write.
-Elissa


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was very deep and full of raw emotion...beautiful!!
I really loved it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

eloquent. breathE

Posted 15 Years Ago



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