Just something i thought up not long ago (:
( I dont give a f**k if you've heard it before but i thought it up on my own unknowingly if it already exists )
Short, Sweet and to the point. Not many poets can do that, they have long complex metaphors that slowly make you dies inside. Great work, an intense rhythm and tone for the theme poem. I'd write more, but I can't exactly point out anything wrong with these four lines.
Cheers,
Brasso
Short, Sweet and to the point. Not many poets can do that, they have long complex metaphors that slowly make you dies inside. Great work, an intense rhythm and tone for the theme poem. I'd write more, but I can't exactly point out anything wrong with these four lines.
Cheers,
Brasso
I'm an 18 year old Australian (:
I'm pretty tall, slim hahaha. I love my video games (:(:(:(: my anime, manga. The things i'm doing/have done in my life inspires me to write even though i suck at i.. more..