Violets.

Violets.

A Poem by Ryan
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Just something i thought up not long ago (: ( I dont give a f**k if you've heard it before but i thought it up on my own unknowingly if it already exists )

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Violets are Violet.

They're not f*****g blue.

But one thing is for certain.

My heart belongs to you.

© 2010 Ryan


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Short, Sweet and to the point. Not many poets can do that, they have long complex metaphors that slowly make you dies inside. Great work, an intense rhythm and tone for the theme poem. I'd write more, but I can't exactly point out anything wrong with these four lines.
Cheers,
Brasso

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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haha im not gannah write some huge fucken thing admiring this thing cause its 4 lines, buttttttttt it did make me laugh so good job :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Amusing and sweet. Proving that you don't need flowery language--pardon the pun--to declare love.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very sweet.
Great version of the over-used original one :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


F**K YEA ROSES!!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Short, Sweet and to the point. Not many poets can do that, they have long complex metaphors that slowly make you dies inside. Great work, an intense rhythm and tone for the theme poem. I'd write more, but I can't exactly point out anything wrong with these four lines.
Cheers,
Brasso

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OK I'm gonna appologize now for this aaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ryan
Ryan

perth, Western Australia, Australia



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