Empty Pocket

Empty Pocket

A Poem by Rvie

I spend much of my penny for foods this week

Now I’m just looking to people who passed by, because I have nothing left.

Funny isn’t it, I don’t even have a phone for displacement.

Just not my day, this will be a great memory to reminisce.

           I never thought that I would be able to experience such state. 
              ---------RvP--------

© 2016 Rvie


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Short and sweet, and very easy to imagine. You've once again conveyed the emotions very well by your choice of words. Sometimes it is a little awkward to read, but I think that that fits with the theme. Very nice work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rvie

8 Years Ago

Thank You! I never thought that someone would appreciate it. Just trying my luck. I'm deeply happy. .. read more

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Added on August 3, 2016
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Rvie
Rvie

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I just want to find a hinterland where I could let my taciturn heart speak out. more..

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