Cold

My hands are wet

from the snowball I've been making

crystal water sparkling

against my skin

My hands are cold

The sleeves of my coat

aren't long enough

to cover them

The tips of my fingers are numb
and nothing can ever warm them again

nothing except your smile

My hands are cold

Reviews

[GwenLark]

This really warmed my heart. Beautiful use of simple words, they hit you with such velocity

[Steve H]

This kind of gave me a bitter sweet feeling, its kind of dark, but the last two lines are nicer :)
I like it, ive been there on a snowy day haha