Sunday

Green water glistening
in puddles on the pavement

the smell of sawdust
and coffee beans

muffled laughter
behind the curtains

Clinging of pots and pans
a dinner being made

TV news and weather report
'Should i carry an umbrella tomorrow?'

A bedtime story
and fresh fluffy pillows

silvery moonshine
on the walls

The only sound is made
by a dripping tap
and the ink stains
on my fingers

Reviews

[Kelley]

this flowed quite wel and I really enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Bhavya Kaushik]

The only sound is made by a dripping tap
and the ink stains on my fingers.


Wow! What a beautiful piece of writing, flowed so flawlessly!
Great work :)