Work in progress of future story

Work in progress of future story

A Story by Beautifulchains
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This is a work in progress of a future story I am working on. Critique is accepted. Sorry f my grammar isn't perfect

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The bathroom was hot, and misty. Iana got out of the shower, putting on a dark red towel. She tried looking into the mirror, but it was fogged up due to the hot shower. Iana got a wash rag, and attempted to wipe off the mirror, but it kept fogging up. After a minute of constant wiping, the mirror finally stayed clear. Iana sighed, looking into the mirror with her light crystal eyes, almost white. Her short, curly hair was a mess. The most noticeable thing on her face was the deep scar on her right cheek. She slowly touched it, her cheek hot, and burning. "Iana, get dressed and cleaned up, your dinner is ready." Iana pressed a button on the wall and spoke. "Iana speaking, get my Pajamas ready!" A couple of seconds later, a draw opened up under the sink. There, was freshly washed and folded pjs.

© 2014 Beautifulchains


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a very interesting paragraph, the curly hair reminds me of "Holiday in Handcuffs" the Christmas special I watched on the programming

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Added on December 20, 2014
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