The Light

The Light

A Poem by The Rainmaker

The whirl of tormented winds 
Cursing and gasping 
Twisting and laughing 
Hide the light  

Desperate clutches, an iron grasp 
Grasping around 
Looking to ground 
Remember the light 

Winds fall away, the calm begins 
Remembering your hands 
The warmth of your heart 
I Found my light

© 2011 The Rainmaker


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I may have taken something different away than other readers. But my mind thought of the fields of France 1915.

Very enjoyable, and makes the reader think and wonder the meaning behind one set of words against the other.

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is a great piece. your writing seems to carry heavy metaphors. As I read this, I imagined the light as a calming and grounding soul that brings peace to the chaos.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on December 30, 2011
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