The Woods

The Woods

A Story by The Callin Winds
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I wrote this around 3 in the morning so the spelling is really bad and so is the grammer.

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ne night Jenny Hustle was walking home from her friends house. Jenny enjoyed to walk home instead of taking a car, because of the high gas prices now a days. As Jenny walked, she enjoyed to think about her day and what the next day would be like. Jenny had everything she could possibly want. Jenny was 28 years old. Jenny had got money from her parents. Jenny parent died of some sickness when she was 11. Jenny‘s older sister for some reason did not inherit any of the money.
Jenny didn’t depend on anyone and she was beautiful. Since she was very good looking, people would her everything she needed. Nothing could ever go wrong, because no one would ever want to hurt her.

 

Broker

Today I got to talk to Ms. Jenny H and her lovely sister Mia. H. Jenny seemed to be just fine. Her grandmother had just passed away. The police say it was a heart attack. I believe it was a plan, because, Jenny’s grandmother was just fine she had no signs of any heart attacks and no signs of brain failure. Jenny’s 7 year old mind will not understand this until she is much older. I hope to tell her by her 8thth birthday, if ever. Well that is all I have to report for today.

 

“That someone was stalking me when I was 7?”She said looking closer at him as if he was. “My dear child do you not see what the blind can see?” Fredrick whispered into Jenny’s ear.

“Let’s keep reading shall we, this note is from when you were 8, so this is a year later I guess.” he said opening the book.:

“Do you see what happened to your grandmother yet?” Fredrick so looking closer at Jenny.

 

A few hours later

I talked to Jenny & Mia about the money that they will be inheriting upon the death of their parents. Mia will be 18 in a year and Jenny will only be 11. I found it fit that Jenny will live with Mia when her parents pass.

Broker

Today I told Jenny & Mia that their grandmother was killed by a heart attack. But I still believe that it is something else. I had to take Mia into a different room to tell her that her parents are getting deeply sick. The food they are eating I think, may be the cause of it. I will look into it later tonight.

 

Out of the blue Fredrick got up and asked her something, she would never thought would be asked. “Do you want something to eat?” he said looking into her cage. “What?” Jenny said confused. “Do you f*****g want something to eat or do you want to starve!” he said hitting a stick against her cage. “Yes I do” Jenny said after a long silence. “ Good I will be back, if you are not here when I come back you are dead” Fredrick said looking at her as he walked out of the cave and into the light of the day.

Jenny waited for 5 minutes then started to work her way out of the cage. Come on damnit I can get out of here, Jenny thought to herself. She broke the lock off the cage and ran for her life.

Her arms ached from the locks, her legs felt like they were going to fall off, but she could not give it up. She needed to get out of the woods, she had to be free, she just knew that this was not her fate. Dying at the hands of some crazy man. NEVER!.

Jenny reached the road leading to her house. She thought about which way to go, her house or town. She started to work her way up to town in hope of getting help. Jenny got onto the side of town, she could smell the smoke and gas in the air. “Almost there!” Jenny said aloud.

“Not really” Fredrick was right behind her. “How did you find me?” Jenny screamed at him.

Somehow, no one in the town could hear her screams as he picked her up and carried her down the road. “Let go of me!!!” Jenny kicked his chest and pulled his hair. “Shut up” He said knocking her out.

The police drove right by Fredrick and Jenny. He just smiled and waved at them. The police turned back around and asked him if the girl on his shoulder was ok. Fredrick thinking as fast as a snake said that she was sleepy from staying out all night. The police laughed at what he said and drove away.

Fredrick jumped into the woods with Jenny. He threw her onto the bed as if she was a rag doll. “You will not be going anywhere soon, just wait till you wake up.”

Fredrick said tying her to the bed. He put a rock and Duct Tape over her mouth.

“Wake up!” Fredrick saying, while hitting her in the face with a rough bare hand.

Jenny looked around the room confused and hurt. She tried to scream but every time she opened her mouth, the rock would go deeper into her throat. Jenny started to shake

Fredrick pulled out a knife and grabbed Jenny’s face and cut a line into her face. Jenny screamed through the duct tape and the rock went further down her throat.

“Now, let’s see if you will run away again” Fredrick said untying her from the bed and taking the Duct tape off her mouth. Jenny spit out the rock and tried to catch a breath.

Jenny thought about hitting him across the face and running for it, but the blood falling down her face, and the soreness or her arms just did not let her.

Jenny stood up and realized what she had to do. She walked into the cage and sat down to listen to the bullshit coming out of his mouth.

“Now. Do you want to hear more about your parents and your sister?” he said, sitting down as if he did not do anything wrong. “Yes I do, tell me everything” Jenny said sitting on the floor. She was trying to stop crying so that she could listen closely.

“Ok here it goes, this is from when you were almost 11

“So my sister was the one getting the money when she was turning 18 & we were going to live together like normal sisters. Not my fault my parents kicked the bucket early.” Jenny said holding her face in her hands. back and fourth trying to get loose from the evil man. & your sister is almost 18.” he said opening the book.

 

 

Lately Jenny has not been talking to Mia as much as she use to. Jenny seems to be mad at Mia for some reason. & Mia just wants to make everything better. It seems that she does not care about the money or what will happen to her as long as Jenny is happy. I just wish I could solve this problem with them both before their parents pass. I will report back to you later when I have news on their parents departing.

Broker

Today when I was talking, Mia seemed like she knew something was going on with her parents and that she wanted to stop them from dying a cruel death. When I talked to Jenny she didn’t really care as long as she could stay in the house and live a long life.

 

Jenny just looked ahead not saying a word. For the first time ever in her mind she felt like she was remembering what happened to her parents.

“Well until you have an answer I will turn off the lights and you can sleep on it.” Fredrick said walking away from the cage, putting the book down by his bed. Then slowly walked over and put out the fire.

In a blink of an eye there was nothing to see, everything was dark and she couldn’t have a hope in the world.

There she was alone in the dark. She was too afraid to try to leave the cage and too hurt to scream for help. Jenny was losing hope in the 4 days that she had been there. The only hope she felt was in the small notebook. The notebook was holding her fate. Jenny was hanging on just to hear what happened to her when she was younger.

The echo of the crickets filled the air. The cold winter night made her freeze.

She wondered when she would find out what happened to her parents, and how they really died. Maybe Mia killed them for the money. Who knows maybe the crazy man keeping her did it. Or Broker (who ever that was) did it. All she knew was

As Jenny was getting her mind back in order, she slowly pulled herself over to the girl and started to talk to her.
 

“Listen to me!” he said unlocking the cage and pushing Tia out of the way. “Listen to me, you killed them!” he shook her and than throw her across the cage. “Don’t touch me again!” Jenny said getting into the corner.

“Well, I can always get Tia over there instead of you, do you want me to change her?, and make her like you?” Fredrick whispered into her ear. “Don’t touch that girl or you are dead” Jenny said under her tears. “Or what, you’ll get up and try to stop me?, I don’t think you can” he said laughing at her and he walked over to Tia. “I will be talking to you soon.” he said leaning over and touching her arm. Slowly he walked out of the cage and locked it.
1 “You are all alone in the world girls. And you need to get use to it., but now I will read more from the heartbreaking book of Jenny.” he said smiling as he sat down. “This part is from when you and your sister were driving to school and she gets in a car crash”
 

Jenny has now started a rumor about me. I am now undergoing the whole police investigation to get my named cleared. She has said that I tried to take her money and her ’dear’ sister away from her. I will find her again somehow and someway.
 

1 year later….


Jenny has got into a car crash while driving to a friend’s house. She has lost all memory of what she did in her past. The police are going to give her a memory book to look over it. They are basically just lying to her. My only wish is that she will one day remember her wrong doings in this small world. and maybe one-day justice will get the better hand of her. She will pay for everything she did to me.

Jenny made a run for it. She jumped over to the corner and ran out of the cage.
Tia ran after Jenny so she would not meet the same fate. Jenny ran to the road and started to run to her house. The storming rain of the night made her sight bad. She ran into her house and picked up her phone and started to call 911. Tia ran into the house after her and locked the door.
“Jenny you need to get out of here, before he comes back.” Tia said looking out the windows. “No one looked for me.. No one cared” Jenny held her head and sat down on the floor. “We need to get out of here” Tia said pulling her up. “No I killed someone I killed people for this, I deserved everything that happened over these past 5 days and he wants to come back and do it again, I deserve it” Jenny said trying to fight Tia from pulling her ahead.

Tia carried her outside and put Jenny into her car as Tia turned the car on Fredrick came and punched through the glass. The glass flew into Tia’s face, hurting her a great deal.
“You are coming back with me.” he said pulling Tia through the glass. “Get off of me!” Tia said punching and kicking him trying to get out of his arms.

Jenny just sat there and watched as he took her away from the car.
After a few seconds of sitting there she started to cry. The girl that she gave up her only innocence to is now gone.
Jenny jumped over to the driver’s side, turned on the car and drove after them.

She caught up with them as Fredrick was walking into the woods. Jenny looked in her car for a knife. All she found was a screwdriver. Without thinking Jenny jumped out of the car and threw the screwdriver at his head.
All you could hear in the darkness on the rainy night was the sound of the screwdriver going into Fredrick’s neck.
He turned around and looked at Jenny then threw Tia on the ground and reached to the back of his neck and pulled the screwdriver out of his neck with a aching crack. Some of the skin off his neck was still on the screwdriver.
Fredrick reached over to Tia and picked her up by the neck. “I am so sorry our love had to end like this” he said smiling as he stabbed the screwdriver through her head.

The sounds of a scream filled the air. It was coming from Jenny.
There on the ground was Tia a 17 year old who was new to the world. Never would she had thought she would die like this. Her eyes still were moving as she fell to the ground.
Tia was gone in a blink of an eye.
Jenny got out of the car and ran to Fredrick about to punch him out. He just stood there and laughed at her. As she started to punch him in the chest. The laugh brought chills to her thoughts. She felt the cold chill of his hands. He picked her up and threw her into a tree.
“Did you think you could beat me, I am better than you!” he said kicking her face. “You won’t beat me. You are nothing, you are nobody, you are a fake. I should have just killed you” he said punching her and kicking her in the face.

She tried to get up, but he kept kicking her down. “You are nothing, you are worthless. And you are coming back with me for some fun, cause that was all you were good for” he said picking her up. Jenny moved out of his arms in a second.
As Fredrick slapped her on the back of the head, Jenny reached for the screw driver inside her friend’s head.

With a quick pull she got the screw driver out. She hid the only chance of survival in her shirt so that she could use it at the right time.

Fredrick picked up Tia’s lifeless body and threw it over his shoulder.
Fredrick carried Jenny into the cave and threw her down on the cold floor. He walked away for a few minutes to hide Tia’s body, then came back with a knife. “You are not going to leave now, are yuh?.” he said kissing her cheek.

He put the knife down and jumped at her as she rolled away from him, she pulled out the screwdriver and stabbed him in the arm. He looked at his bloody arm.
Then Fredrick came at her and threw her into the wall. “You want it like this? Hard and painful just like your bullshit life right?” he said laughing. “You can’t kill me, no one can” he said laughing at her even more.
“I will end you” Jenny said trying to push him off. Jenny looked at his arm and then grabbed the screwdriver and stabbed it deeper into his arm. He shouted and let go of her. Jenny jumped over to the knife and stabbed it into his head. Ending his life. For good.

He looked over at her and smiled. “You got me” he said falling to the ground. His hand ran down her body.

That cold touch will always haunt her till this day.
Jenny walked out of the cave for the last time.

She walked out of the woods and got into her car and drove to the hospital to get her cuts cleaned.

While she was driving the haunting voice of the cruel man will never leave her body, her thoughts, or her dreams.

Jenny walked into the office, the lady said it will be a little while before they could take her.
Jenny sat in the office for a few minutes. Then was called in.
In the doctors office they asked her the normal questions and did the normal shots to make sure she wasn’t sick or anything worse than that. They asked if she had sex lately. Doctors asked these normal questions every time you go to see them. Jenny said sort of. The doctors just looked at her. Then they walk out to go exam her blood.

After a few test the doctors walked back in. They looked like something had happened to make them upset.
“Jenny we need to tell you something you may not want to hear.” the doctor said to her.
“What is it I can handle it.” Jenny said she could handle anything. After the nights she had been through.
“You are Pregnant” the doctor said to her. Jenny just looked up into the sky. On that day she knew that her dreams would never come back.

“Your parents were sick and you didn’t care that they were dying do you see what happened Jenny? Your sister tried so hard to make you happy in this world but you never took it, you always just looked down at her as if she did something wrong. So what do you have to say to all this?” Fredrick said to Jenny waving the book in her face. that she would be dead before the spring. How will she die?, she would think to herself. Will I make him mad and he will cut my neck or will he burn me, hang me, and pull me apart?
After all the thoughts in Jenny’s head, she fell asleep. She didn’t dream, she had nightmares instead. The tortures that she had gone through in just a few days will end up ending her life forever.
Jenny was asleep on the floor when she woke to screaming. She looked out of her cage and saw a 17 year old fighting with Fredrick. He was trying to push her onto the bed. “Let me go!” the girl kept saying to him.
“Let her go!” Jenny shouted at him banging on the cage. Fredrick looked over at the cage and then looked at the girl. Without thinking Fredrick knocked the girl out and walked over to Jenny’s cage. “Your awake, well if you want your eyes to stay in their sockets you will turn your pretty little face away.” Fredrick said looking deep into her eyes. “Or you can take her place, would you save a poor little girl? From the world?” he said smiling “I will take her place, she is only a kid she didn‘t do anything wrong let her go and I will stay.,” Jenny said looking at the young teenager. “Ok then, your choice not mine remember that .” Fredrick said picking up the girl and unlocking the cage and putting her in it, and then pulling Jenny out.
“Let‘s see how much you care.” he said moving closer to her. “Let‘s then” Jenny said walking further away. Jenny walked closer to the door, but she was caught. “What are you doing, you said you would switch places with her or do you want her innocence to be gone.” he said grabbing her. “Ok” Jenny said with a tear coming down her face. “Great” he said throwing her onto the bed. He started to bite her. Jenny was trying to push him off. She started to scream for help. “Please stop..I don’t want to please” she said trying to get him off of her. Jenny started to cry harder. She was trying to scream but he covered her mouth so no one can hear.
After a few minutes she just give up she could not stop what already started.
20 minutes past, but to Jenny it felt like hours. He picked her up and give her a kiss and threw her back into the cage.
Jenny curled up in the corner and cried for the rest of the morning & no one in the world will ever know, what happened to Jenny’s innocence.
The young girl woke up after a few hours of being out. The girl looked around confused and out of place.
So what did you do to get here?” the girl said to Jenny. “I really don’t know I am supposed to be learning.” Jenny said with a shaky voice back to the young girl. “So what is your name ?” the girl asked Jenny. “It is Jenny Hustle, yours?” Jenny said back her voice was small and hurting from screaming.
“My name is Tia” Tia said.
“Well how long have you been here?” Tia whispered as Fredrick walked by. “About 5 days. I am counting down the days till I get out of here, I need to learn a lesson about my past so I can be better in the future, or some s**t like that” Jenny whispered back to her. “We will get out together, he cant do anything too bad to you”, Tia whispered to Jenny and took her hand. “You have no idea” Jenny said pulling her hand away.
“Now Jenny how are you feeling?” Fredrick said putting his hand into the cage, he was smiling at her fear. As he did Jenny pulled away and backed into the corner. “Come on you need to listen to your story remember?” Fredrick said in a teasing voice as if to make her feel better. Than he pulled out the book with out another word he started to read from it.
It has come to my attention that Jenny killed her parents, we have found two cases of rat poisoning. But I cannot send an 11 year old to jail. I will just watch her and make sure she doesn’t hurt anyone else. I will have to talk to Mia about it so she can make sure everything is higher than Jenny is, so no one can get hurt.. She is going to be watched . I will not let her take another life.
This is how I am sure Jenny was the one who found her parents dead on the floor. And her prints were on the cups and on the feeder tube to her parents. I will get her one day.
But till that day comes I will follow her and make sure no one else is hurt.
Broker

“Is that true? Did you kill your parents?” Fredrick asked Jenny. Jenny just looked away from him and ignored the question.Today Jenny and Mia got into a car crash. We found a book bag that had Jenny’s name on it. Mia is now under going treatment for her brain. It seems she got impaled by the wheel. Jenny is only 17 now she is insane. She gets away with it and when you catch her she lies. She is almost old enough to get Mia’s money if she dies. Right now Mia is in a coma we will see what happens next. I will sign back in a few hours.
Broker.-
Ok Mia is in a coma. The Doctors say she will be out in less than a week. Jenny is going to be living with her aunt for a little while. Jenny is sort of sad that her sister is in a coma but it seems that she is focused on other things I just don’t know why she has not talked to me in so long. One day we will meet again. & I will confront her.
Broker


“You are almost done knowing all about your life, and if you understand why I am telling you this I will let you go, if not you will be here until you die” Fredrick said leaning onto his chair. He reopened it to the last two pages and read it to Jenny.
Mia has awaked from her coma. Her brain functions are slower than before I fear that she will never do anything, ever again. I am sad for her. There fore in a year Jenny will be getting all of the money and will take care of her sister.
2 months later….
Jenny is 18. She has just got back from the bank with her new money. It looks to me like she kicked her older sister out of the house and her sister is know living with her boyfriend. He will take good care of her. I think he will take better care of Mia than Jenny would ever have done.

Broker
“I did kill them… I hurt the ones I loved to get what I wanted and it worked. But I was forgiven by, a man named Broker… he followed me around the world. He stalked me. You….took my life away.. over the past few days. And know what, I don’t care. Broker was an old preacher man who deserved nothing but what I gave him, ” Jenny said getting up, it looked like she had some strength left to stand up to him.
“Come here” he said opening the cage and walking in. “Get away from her!” Tia jumped in the way. “I am going to enjoy having you around here, and you are going to enjoy being around me so don’t make me mad.” Fredrick said throwing her across the cage. “ you just lost Jenny, you are done here, but first before you leave you can give me a kiss” he said walking closer.
At that moment she broke down and a tear fell down her cheek. “Why are you crying? Are you scared of me?, come here” he said moving closer.

The End

As Jenny was walking onto her front porch she heard someone calling her name. “Jenny come back you forgot your handbag!!” The voice was calling to her. It was coming from the woods.

“It’s me Lexie, come get your purse. I can’t walk to your house cause my boyfriend said I couldn’t walk all the way down to you because it’s dark”. “Ok, here I come girl” Jenny said walking down onto the road and into the woods.

Jenny was walking into the woods. As she was looking for her dear friend, out of the blue she heard a scream in the woods. When Jenny heard the blood curdling scream she ran out of the woods.

As she got closer to the road leading back to her house she saw a broken tree stump that said ‘Broker’ on it. Who is Broker? Jenny thought to herself.

As Jenny thought about the name, she walked into her house and got on the computer. She picked up her phone and called Lexie.

“Hey Lex, do you know anything about someone named Broker?, cause when I was looking for you I found a tree that had the name on it?” Jenny said opening a game of solitaire on her computer.

“Not a clue,…I didn’t call you Jen, when you left I jumped in the shower.”

“What? Then who was calling me?” Jenny said pausing her game.

“Jen are you ok?.. hello” Lexie shouted

But Jenny walked away from the phone. All Jenny could hear was her friend screaming into the phone for her to come back. As Jenny walked outside she heard the phone hang up. She looked down and saw a note card that said ‘Broker’. I didn’t write this down she thought to herself. She looked out into her yard and saw note cards all over the ground. All of them said ’Broker’

Jenny followed all of the note cards back to the edge of the woods. As she picked the last one up she flipped it over and it said ’TURN AROUND’. A man shaped figure knocked her out.

As Jenny awoke, She felt cuts and burns on her arms and legs, like she was pulled through sticks and paddles by her arms and legs.

Jenny’s eyes became focused she looked at her arms, they were bound by wire to a pole. Her legs were tied together by rope to the pole. She could sort of move her legs up just to push off the pole a little. Each time she tried to move back the aching feeling of rusty wire cut into her wrist.

Without a thought of what would happen next, she started to scream at the top of her lungs for help. “Someone Get me down please!!!!!!!!” Jenny kept saying into the cold winter night..

But all that answered was her echo. Where am I? she thought to herself.

In the cold night, a voice cut the silence. “Good evening my fair lady” the voice said to her. The voice was rough and sort of sounded like it was cut or hurt. “Whose there?” Jenny said moving around.

“It’s your prince, I am here to take you away from the world of darkness” the voice said to her. As she was moving around a hand reached out and touched her face. “HELP ME!! Somebody” Jenny screamed as he touched her face. The soft touch turned into a slap. “Get off of me!!!” she screamed at him she tried to kick him away from her, but couldn’t.

“Time to go” the man said untying her. Jenny freaked out and kicked him as he was taking her off the pole. He punched her in the stomach and threw her over his shoulder.

Jenny lost her breath from the hard blow in the stomach. .

“Whhhere…are you.. taking me?” Jenny said trying to get her air back. “The sun is coming up I don’t want anyone to try to take you away.” the man said taking her further and further away from the pole, Jenny fainted under the pain that she was feeling.

As he carried her into a cave, there was a bright fire burning in the middle of the cave. “Don’t worry you will see the error of your ways, just wait.” the man said pulling out a small knife.

“Goodnight” he said putting the knife closer to her. As he reached closer to her body to cut her, she woke up.

“Let go of me you b*****d !,” Jenny said kicking up.

Jenny got up from the cold floor and started to run to the small door leading to the outside world.

“Stop right there if you want to walk two steps again” the man said jumping onto her and throwing her onto a cold rocky bed.

“Why are you doing this to me?” Jenny said, starting to cry a little bit. “You don’t know what you did to make this happen?, I will tell you then”, the man said picking her up and throwing her into a small cage. “Let me go right now!!!” She said hitting the cage with her arms. “Calm your a*s down So I can tell you why you are here & if you understand why you are here I will let you go and you can flirt or do whatever woman do, understand me?,” he said sitting down next to the cage & picking up a small old book.

“What is that?” Jenny said trying to look over his shoulder. “Your life in a small book. From your 1st kiss to now well I am just going to read to you what you did wrong in your life” the man said looking through it.

“Who are you?” Jenny said confused.

“I am Fredrick M. The 4th. I come from Scottsdale, England. & I wish to teach you a lesson if you don’t mind, and tell you what your friends and family failed to tell you,” Fredrick said to her opening to a page. “Now listen as your whole life is revealed.” he said starting to read:

© 2008 The Callin Winds


Author's Note

The Callin Winds
I am 15 years old & it took me 1 month to write this. I usally wrote this around 3 in the morning cause that is when i could get to the computer. Tell me what you think. Because i wrote this in Word, i had to copy it over to this. that is why there are no Paragraphs. PLease Comment i need to know what the world thinks

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