I enjoyed the poem. Gave respect and beauty to the earth.
"Feelings earthed, in the waterfalls sits a treasure isle
as the current splashes in this rainbow high
or broken and sometimes two to say goodbye
the sounds of the silence, a grin or a smile."
I like the journey and visions create by the amazing poetry my friend.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you, John, for your beautiful words. Have a good day. :) Rudi
9 Years Ago
You are welcome. Always a pleasure to read your words.
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This is a treasure hunt poem and the treasure map isn’t leading to the expected X’s marking the expected spots, not at all. All are good, but the first verse is a treasure of itself.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Delmar, glad you liked it. :) Rudi
Rudi: First stanza is written so beautifully. It is the sum of all fears, death and regret. It flows so well, like all your poems, but always a little extra for the reader. You know you could never fail to disappoint. I could visualize the death of a love one, a child. The artwork is interesting. And then the departure to love, I suppose another heaven on earth, that belongs to you. Wonderful writing Rudi. Thanks...Dale
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9 Years Ago
Thank you, Dale, it's alway nice to read your remarks. Thanks for the favourable comment. Have a goo.. read moreThank you, Dale, it's alway nice to read your remarks. Thanks for the favourable comment. Have a good day. :) Rudi
You're welcome Rudi: Hope you & your family have a wonderful weekend.
9 Years Ago
You too, Dale, I guess it's also mother's day in America, or not? I hope your children will think ab.. read moreYou too, Dale, I guess it's also mother's day in America, or not? I hope your children will think about you on that day. A mother is a very special person in everyone's life. :) Rudi
9 Years Ago
That's sweet; I truly thought about you and your Mother as a wrote. Forgot about Mother's Day until.. read moreThat's sweet; I truly thought about you and your Mother as a wrote. Forgot about Mother's Day until my daughter & I were riding to Charleston today. My husband always brings my son for something: I usually like plants for outside...but a card would be fine. I know you will remember your Mother. Have a good time - hope you will get to see her Sunday; she would love that. Thanks Rudi.
I love the vision that this placed in my head while reading it. I've always loved the earth and plants and this brought a whole new feeling of comfort and peace when it comes to these things. It has a sad tone to it but still I feel comforted. Thank you for sharing this with me, Rudi :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you, RiverRei, I'm glad you like this poem too. Have a good day. :) Rudi
I enjoyed the poem. Gave respect and beauty to the earth.
"Feelings earthed, in the waterfalls sits a treasure isle
as the current splashes in this rainbow high
or broken and sometimes two to say goodbye
the sounds of the silence, a grin or a smile."
I like the journey and visions create by the amazing poetry my friend.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you, John, for your beautiful words. Have a good day. :) Rudi
9 Years Ago
You are welcome. Always a pleasure to read your words.
from birth to death, the rising of life from the sea, to the end of days in this shallow earth we call our grave, a masterful write Rudi :)
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9 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Richard. One of my sonnets Italian style, I'm glad you loved this one too. :) Ru.. read moreThank you so much, Richard. One of my sonnets Italian style, I'm glad you loved this one too. :) Rudi
The miracle of birth (tears preside); the ebb and flow of water (life); and the peaceful rest in that final piece of earth from which Adam was made... all glimpses of heaven... well-done, Rudi!
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you, FT, a great review. Many thanks for your kind words. :) Rudi
I'm from Belgium. English is not my native language, but I like to read English poems and books. I have written a lot of Dutch poems during the last forty years. With some of them I've got prizes in B.. more..