life is a puzzle which only you could decide what to do with it; would you find the real piece that would give details of who you are. In the end, it is you that can make things possible by working out with your goal.
Thanks for the nice read. ;)
JC Rabanes
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you JC, nice to read your comments, have a fine day. :) Rudi
life is a puzzle which only you could decide what to do with it; would you find the real piece that would give details of who you are. In the end, it is you that can make things possible by working out with your goal.
Thanks for the nice read. ;)
JC Rabanes
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you JC, nice to read your comments, have a fine day. :) Rudi
You wish upon a wishing star, for things to be different than they are. Reason is only a part of man, and emotions will overcome any time they can. The voice of love is stronger than the voice of reason.
i fully understand how difficult it can be to write in a language which isn't your native tongue...
... you've created lovely imagery with with twists of irony. i enjoyed the message of this piece
thank you for sharing
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you, Miss M, for passing by and reading my poem. Thanks for you kind remarks. Have a good day... read moreThank you, Miss M, for passing by and reading my poem. Thanks for you kind remarks. Have a good day. :) Rudi
but who will fulfil them
do I have to wait
on a Deus ex machina
with Harry Potter’s magic wand
to smash to smitereens
all my Voldemort’s
‘sigh’
I liked this lines because it gave a strange humor to your sign making it more real though t's written with creative imaginary
The rest of the poem I enjoyed very much ..may be this one i liked the most from your collection :)
I wonder if all poets would join hearts and hands would the sorrow disappear from the world and happiness and peace begin to live? you are a writer of such tender and kind wishes...
This is beautiful, but I see it as more of a call, or a wish for understanding, maybe from frustration. It is almost, or is like you are simply asking the universe why, what can I do? Does it take the magic want; making me remember my latin too. The ending is lovely as well. No doubt, a wonderful poet; learn much from you. I wish to be so honest in writing. What a talent. I only speak the truth. Never give up; keep writing! Dale
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you Dale for your wonderful and favourable comments. I'll always write till I can't type anymo.. read moreThank you Dale for your wonderful and favourable comments. I'll always write till I can't type anymore and then I'll find a solution to that too. :) Rudi
Change starts first from within yourself, I like the message here.
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10 Years Ago
Yes, that's the general message, because I think the other option is fantasy I'm afraid. Thank you A.. read moreYes, that's the general message, because I think the other option is fantasy I'm afraid. Thank you Ana for taking time to read my writing. :) Rudi
I'm from Belgium. English is not my native language, but I like to read English poems and books. I have written a lot of Dutch poems during the last forty years. With some of them I've got prizes in B.. more..