'Sigh'

'Sigh'

A Poem by Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere
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What is love? It is the morning and the evening star. Sinclair Lewis

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I may wish upon

a far away falling star

asking some love and friendship

and peace and understanding for each other

I may wish

till my thoughts will hurt

 

but who will fulfil them

do I have to wait

on a Deus ex machina

with Harry Potter’s magic wand

to smash to smitereens

all my Voldemort’s

 

‘sigh’

 

I’ll do what I do every year

hoping this year will not be worse

praying till someone finally listens

to the voice of reason

but above all and first, I’ll begin with myself

and the people who are close to me.

 

© Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

27/12/2014

© 2014 Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere


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life is a puzzle which only you could decide what to do with it; would you find the real piece that would give details of who you are. In the end, it is you that can make things possible by working out with your goal.

Thanks for the nice read. ;)

JC Rabanes

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you JC, nice to read your comments, have a fine day. :) Rudi
J.C. Rabanes

9 Years Ago

no problem man... your welcome... ;)



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life is a puzzle which only you could decide what to do with it; would you find the real piece that would give details of who you are. In the end, it is you that can make things possible by working out with your goal.

Thanks for the nice read. ;)

JC Rabanes

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you JC, nice to read your comments, have a fine day. :) Rudi
J.C. Rabanes

9 Years Ago

no problem man... your welcome... ;)
You wish upon a wishing star, for things to be different than they are. Reason is only a part of man, and emotions will overcome any time they can. The voice of love is stronger than the voice of reason.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i fully understand how difficult it can be to write in a language which isn't your native tongue...
... you've created lovely imagery with with twists of irony. i enjoyed the message of this piece

thank you for sharing

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Miss M, for passing by and reading my poem. Thanks for you kind remarks. Have a good day... read more
but who will fulfil them
do I have to wait
on a Deus ex machina
with Harry Potter’s magic wand
to smash to smitereens
all my Voldemort’s

‘sigh’

I liked this lines because it gave a strange humor to your sign making it more real though t's written with creative imaginary
The rest of the poem I enjoyed very much ..may be this one i liked the most from your collection :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you ReD, glad you liked this one. :) Rudi
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Gee
We all wish and hope Rudi,then it's fingers crossed to see what fate had to surprise us with.Nice.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you Gee, for reading my poem. :) Rudi
Gee

9 Years Ago

You're welcome
I wonder if all poets would join hearts and hands would the sorrow disappear from the world and happiness and peace begin to live? you are a writer of such tender and kind wishes...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you again and I wish it also. :) Rudi
I’ll begin with myself
and the people who are close to me....so nice thoughts and so beautifully structured...:))

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you Ann, glad you liked it. :) Rudi
I still make wishes on stars...some do come true.
I wish that for you!


:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thanks, Julie, for your kind words. :) Rudi
This is beautiful, but I see it as more of a call, or a wish for understanding, maybe from frustration. It is almost, or is like you are simply asking the universe why, what can I do? Does it take the magic want; making me remember my latin too. The ending is lovely as well. No doubt, a wonderful poet; learn much from you. I wish to be so honest in writing. What a talent. I only speak the truth. Never give up; keep writing! Dale

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

10 Years Ago

Thank you Dale for your wonderful and favourable comments. I'll always write till I can't type anymo.. read more
Confuser

10 Years Ago

Right !!!! Always positive.
Change starts first from within yourself, I like the message here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

10 Years Ago

Yes, that's the general message, because I think the other option is fantasy I'm afraid. Thank you A.. read more

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Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere
Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

Wingene, West-Vlaanderen, Belgium



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I'm from Belgium. English is not my native language, but I like to read English poems and books. I have written a lot of Dutch poems during the last forty years. With some of them I've got prizes in B.. more..

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