Very nice use of words and thoughts.
"it’s a poem that is reciting itself,
a never-ending story,
a song that is never the same,"
When life and poetry flow out with ease. Always a good day. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you, John, for visiting and reading my poetry. :) Rudi
Very nice use of words and thoughts.
"it’s a poem that is reciting itself,
a never-ending story,
a song that is never the same,"
When life and poetry flow out with ease. Always a good day. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you, John, for visiting and reading my poetry. :) Rudi
It's poetry like this that makes me proud to be a writer.
I'm a daily jogger, and I usually get my time in early in the morning. To actually witness that kind of awakening, as you described here with the spider and the blackbird, simply invigorates one's soul!
"I’m humming an air of happiness,
it’s a good start of my day."
...I couldn't have said it better! How sweet it is!
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you, Kelly, glad I could make you feel like that. Have a good weekend, my friend. :) Rudi
caught myself humming along with you, Rudi...thanks for this inspiring tribute to nature and starting the day with a smile...wonderful poetry, my friend
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you, FT, for reading and reviewing. Have a good day, my friend. :) Rudi
I'm from Belgium. English is not my native language, but I like to read English poems and books. I have written a lot of Dutch poems during the last forty years. With some of them I've got prizes in B.. more..