I enjoyed the series of poetry. Each one a masterpiece and amazing tale.
"Farewell, you who loved me unjustly,
Goodbye, heart eaters and soul breakers,
I’ll see you down there,
Because after all, make no mistake
Everyone deserves his own piece of hell."
The above lines. Perfect. Thank you Rudi for sharing your outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you, John, for reading all my poems. Glad you enjoyed them. :) Rudi
I enjoyed the series of poetry. Each one a masterpiece and amazing tale.
"Farewell, you who loved me unjustly,
Goodbye, heart eaters and soul breakers,
I’ll see you down there,
Because after all, make no mistake
Everyone deserves his own piece of hell."
The above lines. Perfect. Thank you Rudi for sharing your outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you, John, for reading all my poems. Glad you enjoyed them. :) Rudi
Don't you stop writing now, lol. One of the very best pieces from this selection of works, and it's fitting because it's the conclusion. Looked carefully at, a reader can definitely see your improvement and growth as a writer from chapter one to the finale. A soul captured within the darkness and unable to keep a grip onto the light, and perhaps we can all take a lesson from our character here who found himself trapped under the wings of the raven. Always seems to be an underlying layer of hope despite the horrific and creepy imagery littered throughout this series. And that seems to be confirmed by the final words, "Or maybe not." No matter how far we fall, we will always have the chance to conclude the tale with light rather than dark.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you, TheRaven, for following, reading and commenting on this collection of poems. I've learned.. read moreThank you, TheRaven, for following, reading and commenting on this collection of poems. I've learned a lot reading your comments and I'm glad this last poem is the correct conclusion of the serie of poems. :) Rudi
and what a fabulous conclusion, stop point, goodbye it is ...
I checked you know ... not one 'that' word and barely any others not warranted :) nice one Rudi.
A poem riddled with a muse possessed with unworthiness ... ah if only they hung on to the light X
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you, KWP, I guessed (that) you'll be proud of me. While writing it this afternoon, I remembere.. read moreThank you, KWP, I guessed (that) you'll be proud of me. While writing it this afternoon, I remembered your comment and I worked. Thanks again for the tips and for your comment on this one. Have a good day. :) Rudi
I'm from Belgium. English is not my native language, but I like to read English poems and books. I have written a lot of Dutch poems during the last forty years. With some of them I've got prizes in B.. more..