Great voice, this was a whole lot better listened to than read from my view. But then I read it again and liked it more the second time through. Funny how things change your view.
Not quite the same metaphorical aspect I've gotten from other pieces within this series of poems, however after continued readings I found the atmospheric horror of this piece a whole hell of a lot of fun!! Ah there it is, the metaphor I was looking for. Fear personified as the horseman. Perhaps in some essence, the darkness of man embodied as the horseman. There's a sweet old school poetic tone to this that I really enjoyed, you just don't see it often anymore.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thanks, for reading so many of my poems, it makes my day, not only because it's favorable but also b.. read moreThanks, for reading so many of my poems, it makes my day, not only because it's favorable but also because it gives me a reason, a boost to go further on that path. :) Rudi
Great voice, this was a whole lot better listened to than read from my view. But then I read it again and liked it more the second time through. Funny how things change your view.
Not quite the same metaphorical aspect I've gotten from other pieces within this series of poems, however after continued readings I found the atmospheric horror of this piece a whole hell of a lot of fun!! Ah there it is, the metaphor I was looking for. Fear personified as the horseman. Perhaps in some essence, the darkness of man embodied as the horseman. There's a sweet old school poetic tone to this that I really enjoyed, you just don't see it often anymore.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thanks, for reading so many of my poems, it makes my day, not only because it's favorable but also b.. read moreThanks, for reading so many of my poems, it makes my day, not only because it's favorable but also because it gives me a reason, a boost to go further on that path. :) Rudi
I'm enjoying the series of poetry.
"Do I hear in the wind
his silent laughter
while he whispers softly
oh, child of men
there is no escape"
Myth and tale are my favorite. I liked the above lines. Strong and true. Thank you Rudi for sharing the outstanding poetry and tale.
Coyote
I'm from Belgium. English is not my native language, but I like to read English poems and books. I have written a lot of Dutch poems during the last forty years. With some of them I've got prizes in B.. more..