After reviewing the Shadows, I feel like it's confirmed here as well. You definitely got better as this series went forward. The ending bit there about the ghosts being gone again during the day mirrors the more subtle concepts about life and the inner darkness of man's nature that began appearing later in your pieces. Also, the simplistic elements of capturing a uniquely creepy tone akin to Poe is used here, thought not as effective as later pieces. I simply see this as the beginning of your improving writing, the beginning of the descent into a dreamworld of darkness.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you, for reading and reviewing, means a great deal to me. :) Rudi
There can be many ghosts of bygones...visiting one during fitful nights of sleep and then when the day breaks...one wishes for a full nights sleep missed....I so enjoy your writing ...it is soft to the senses...
After reviewing the Shadows, I feel like it's confirmed here as well. You definitely got better as this series went forward. The ending bit there about the ghosts being gone again during the day mirrors the more subtle concepts about life and the inner darkness of man's nature that began appearing later in your pieces. Also, the simplistic elements of capturing a uniquely creepy tone akin to Poe is used here, thought not as effective as later pieces. I simply see this as the beginning of your improving writing, the beginning of the descent into a dreamworld of darkness.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you, for reading and reviewing, means a great deal to me. :) Rudi
You've created a great atmosphere with this, something different and interesting. I like this style, you should develop this style more
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
I'm in the process of doing all my poems that are collected 'Under the wings of the Raven', here on .. read moreI'm in the process of doing all my poems that are collected 'Under the wings of the Raven', here on WC in the same way. There were already a few that were on Soundcloud, but I'm busy working on the rest too. Thanks for reading and commenting, Be. :) Rudi
A amazing opening chapter. You create place, visions and thoughts. I like the feel of mystery in the words. Thank you Rudi for sharing the excellent opening words.
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Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you, John, for taking time to read my poetry. :) Rudi
8 Years Ago
Always my pleasure to read your work and you are welcome.
I'm from Belgium. English is not my native language, but I like to read English poems and books. I have written a lot of Dutch poems during the last forty years. With some of them I've got prizes in B.. more..