many a time I've gone down memory lane and wondered if something done or said may have changed the outcome of events that have brought me here today where i stand. the funny thing is whenever i need time to think I'll go to the beach, watching the tide roll in gives me peace of mind. excellent write and thank you for sharing.
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, Mauricio. Glad you liked it. :) Rudi
many a time I've gone down memory lane and wondered if something done or said may have changed the outcome of events that have brought me here today where i stand. the funny thing is whenever i need time to think I'll go to the beach, watching the tide roll in gives me peace of mind. excellent write and thank you for sharing.
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9 Years Ago
Thank you for reading and reviewing, Mauricio. Glad you liked it. :) Rudi
Rudi, I really enjoyed then structure of this piece you have written, so interesting and original. Looking back at the good times in life and the precious moments.
Thank you, Robert, for passing by and reading my poem. :) Rudi
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I have over a hundred RR that I am chipping away at each day. I don't read more than 10 a day becaus.. read moreI have over a hundred RR that I am chipping away at each day. I don't read more than 10 a day because its hard to keep my attention that long. Don't thank that I forget though I get to all of them eventually.
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Thank you, Robert, a great challenge it is. :) Rudi
Rudi, your poetry is multi-layered. It is so true, as we grow older, we appreciate the moments in life we may have overlooked at a younger age. We know the meanings of things we could not grasp at a younger age. Memories are precious. Wonderful work. Lydi**
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9 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Lydi. So true what you are saying. Really appreciated. :) Rudi
I have walked the timeline, hand in hand, with the sand slipping from under my feet, taking with it memories. I understand the music and the silence. I breathe the beach and reach for words riding away with the tide. Thanks for the journey.
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9 Years Ago
Thank you, Lily, for reading and reviewing. Have a good day. :) Rudi
I love you use the words. Taking the reader on a pleasure journey. I enjoyed the poem. The flow of words took me into deep thoughts and quiet places. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
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Thanks, John, for your kind remarks. Glad you liked this one too. :) Rudi
Our time here is ever fleeting. I believe the tide ebbs, to help us understand how precious life truly is. Your work is wonderful, and gives me cause to ponder, Rudi!
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9 Years Ago
Thank you, Kelly, always glad if my words make people think. :) Rudi
I'm from Belgium. English is not my native language, but I like to read English poems and books. I have written a lot of Dutch poems during the last forty years. With some of them I've got prizes in B.. more..