Wonderlijke beeld dat uw schilderd voor iedereen, heel erg bedankt! Imagining trees with blood life in them, how water should be seen, the intensity of the wind, the reach of the golden sun, and how the forest holds its breath, withholding carbon dioxide-releasing oxygen, whilst shadow and light or night and day dance their duet. Truly a beautiful scene you have set, such a theatrical ballet, thank you sharing such beauty!
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9 Years Ago
Thank you, Nadia, glad you liked my poem. Ik wens je nog een goede dag. :) Rudi
Wonderlijke beeld dat uw schilderd voor iedereen, heel erg bedankt! Imagining trees with blood life in them, how water should be seen, the intensity of the wind, the reach of the golden sun, and how the forest holds its breath, withholding carbon dioxide-releasing oxygen, whilst shadow and light or night and day dance their duet. Truly a beautiful scene you have set, such a theatrical ballet, thank you sharing such beauty!
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you, Nadia, glad you liked my poem. Ik wens je nog een goede dag. :) Rudi
Rudi it was really a warm read for my heart. You're amazing with your words man! it was really divine I feel....
the forest is holding his breath
in the quiet after the storm
when shadow and light
very amorously are starting
a colourful duet of ballet.
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9 Years Ago
I like to write about Mother Nature, she's a beautiful lady and there are so many aspects you can wr.. read moreI like to write about Mother Nature, she's a beautiful lady and there are so many aspects you can write about. Plant, trees, animals etc. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Skyfall. Have a nice day. :) Rudi
Rudi, I really love to read poems on Nature. Glad to found a friend like you, who writes so beautifu.. read moreRudi, I really love to read poems on Nature. Glad to found a friend like you, who writes so beautiful and clear with all thoughts. A warm welcome to you & wishing you a great day ahead!
9 Years Ago
Well, maybe you should like 'Dragonfly', the first poem I've posted here on WC. I've changed it a bi.. read moreWell, maybe you should like 'Dragonfly', the first poem I've posted here on WC. I've changed it a bit and have read it on a bit of music that I've placed on soundcloud: here's the link if you are interested:
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Rudi/1435383/
Rudi, exspect nothing less, but magic, the beauty of nature so well defined, waiting, breathing; it's love and it's lovely. Enjoyed the Dutch version too. Does sound beautiful; so much like German. Thank you so very much. You know I love the forest. In Silence, great title too. Just brilliant. Dale
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9 Years Ago
Thank you, Dale, nice to read your words. Thanks for the wonderful comment. Have a fine weekend. :) .. read moreThank you, Dale, nice to read your words. Thanks for the wonderful comment. Have a fine weekend. :) Rudi
9 Years Ago
Same to you & yours, you're welcome, but with your work; I feel honored. It's always my pleasure - .. read moreSame to you & yours, you're welcome, but with your work; I feel honored. It's always my pleasure - I thank you!!!
And nature speaks in the best silenced of times, when we can listen the most.
I love the dance of colors and the pull and push between the wind and leaves.
Serene and lovely.
:D
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9 Years Ago
Thank you, Dajena, glad you liked it. Have a good day. :) Rudi
This is rich in it's imagery Rudi and sensual in its feeling - absolutely well conveyed dear poet.
I enjoyed this.
Could I make one suggestion - if you find yourself using 'very 'anything' ' perhaps there is a stronger synonym could be used for effect.
eg
very amorously = impassioned
very deep = deeply
:)
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9 Years Ago
Thank you, ANTO, for reading and reviewing and also for the suggestions. Really appreciated. :) Rudi
',, the forest is holding his breath - in the quiet after the storm .. '
There's true purity here, words smoothly laid, meaning calm yet somehow energising.. an invitation to dance in both the shadows and light of your intention. Stunning writing, flowing gently.. tis a gift.
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9 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Emmajoy, your words make me happy. Have a good day. :) Rudi
I'm from Belgium. English is not my native language, but I like to read English poems and books. I have written a lot of Dutch poems during the last forty years. With some of them I've got prizes in B.. more..