Another wonderful piece in this series. Another piece that I can completely envision the surroundings described. This makes me want to go to a beach and enjoy the breeze. I've always loved the water and seeing how far it stretches, etc. Thanks for sharing this with me, Rudi :)
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Thank you, RiverRei, glad you liked this piece too. In my youth I've been a lot to the seaside with .. read moreThank you, RiverRei, glad you liked this piece too. In my youth I've been a lot to the seaside with my family, I have great memories about it. :) Rudi
Rudi: Another lovely poem - my imagination swells when I read poetry, the visual impact of this poem is beauty. All the echoing sounds at the seashore, and it makes me think of the first time I picked up a shell to listen for the sounds of the ocean, the white waves, tumbling out to sea, intertwining with all those lost souls, you never know what words they could return with. No? So far, So wide, So wild...hear how the rhymes rustle: I do wonder what they say. Great writing. Thank you. Dale
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Thank you, Dale, I'm very proud of these three poems, because it's also the ones my brother has used.. read moreThank you, Dale, I'm very proud of these three poems, because it's also the ones my brother has used for a composition, a collaboration between brothers feels always very good. :) Rudi
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Hope all three are on the link....You're welcome...
I'm from Belgium. English is not my native language, but I like to read English poems and books. I have written a lot of Dutch poems during the last forty years. With some of them I've got prizes in B.. more..