Good description gave life to the artwork.
"Between going up and landing, there’s a gap
Where earthly time and gravity is non-existent
Where the skyline has no borders, no worldly map"
I liked the above lines. Create good thoughts and vision. Thank you my friend for sharing your outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you, John, for visiting, reading and reviewing. Glad you like it. Have a nice day. :) Rudi
Floating through space and time..you take us on journey between the spaces.. those uncovered waters!
i love this write and believe that we should never stop exploring and navigating as we never know what we may find!
Awesome picture too Rudi!
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you again, Sereena, for reading and reviewing my poem. :) Rudi
I always love dream themed poetry :) So mysterious and so many ways to write about them. Nightmares, good dreams, falling dreams, running dreams...I love it :) Your writing is always wonderful thank you for sharing Rudi :)
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9 Years Ago
Thank you, RiverRei, for your nice words. Have a good day. :) Rudi
Whenever we stop wondering we have stopped living. I liked reading the quiver of questions as you picked them out one by one. May your heart always rejoice in the truth you'll find. :D
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9 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Moonskittles. Thanks for passing by, reading and reviewing. Have a good day. :) .. read moreThank you so much, Moonskittles. Thanks for passing by, reading and reviewing. Have a good day. :) Rudi
Rudi: So many theories; I like the books and movies that say, we're are just an illusion. In the first stanza, great questions; I thought too the waterfall now before or after the stream is interesting, but I found myself wondering; maybe the rhyme, what's in between? 2nd stanza is thought provoking too; the old hypotheses are forever changing; so interesting too; what is consciousness anyway? Stanza 3 is beautiful; you are so talented. We are stardust aren't we? No? We are miracles. Your writing is superb. Thank you so very much. Dale
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9 Years Ago
Hello, Dale, glad to hear you. Thanks for passing by and reading my poem. Thanks also for your nice .. read moreHello, Dale, glad to hear you. Thanks for passing by and reading my poem. Thanks also for your nice remarks, it's really appreciated. Have a nice day. :) Rudi
I’m floating further on some thoughts full of air
Carried by new ideas and very old hypotheses
Driven by a sigh filled with a humble prayer
Can I really wait till the end of all the other species
Wow..Rudi..this is amazing...:))
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9 Years Ago
Thank you, Anne, for visiting, reading and reviewing. :) Rudi
A questions we all ask ourselves, Rudi... perhaps we spend most of our lives dreaming because the realities of the world around us become unbearable sometimes. You've captured well the twisted way our minds work from time to time and who knows where those thoughts will land. Fortunately for us, your words land sweetly on the page (in this case, on the screen) and we are able to share in your poetic observations of the world through your poetry. I felt weightless while reading this and really love the accompanying photo. Well-done!
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you so much for this long review. They are really appreciated. Have a nice day, FT. :) Rudi
Good description gave life to the artwork.
"Between going up and landing, there’s a gap
Where earthly time and gravity is non-existent
Where the skyline has no borders, no worldly map"
I liked the above lines. Create good thoughts and vision. Thank you my friend for sharing your outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you, John, for visiting, reading and reviewing. Glad you like it. Have a nice day. :) Rudi
I'm from Belgium. English is not my native language, but I like to read English poems and books. I have written a lot of Dutch poems during the last forty years. With some of them I've got prizes in B.. more..