Curvature in my head

Curvature in my head

A Poem by Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere
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In life, as in art, the beautiful moves in curves. Edward G. Bulwer-Lytton

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Is the only dream that I have spelled out reality

Or is my world just an accidental dream

Does the curve in my head is called mentality

Is the waterfall now before or after the stream

 

I’m floating further on some thoughts full of air

Carried by new ideas and very old hypotheses

Driven by a sigh filled with a humble prayer

Can I really wait till the end of all the other species

 

Between going up and landing, there’s a gap

Where earthly time and gravity is non-existent

Where the skyline has no borders, no worldly map

 

Is mentioning the stardust in this spatial distant  

Where I’ll be forever, where I’ll voluntarily unwrap

And melt together and just be, there’ll be no resistance.

 

© Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

04/05/2015  

 

 

© 2015 Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere


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Good description gave life to the artwork.
"Between going up and landing, there’s a gap
Where earthly time and gravity is non-existent
Where the skyline has no borders, no worldly map"
I liked the above lines. Create good thoughts and vision. Thank you my friend for sharing your outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you, John, for visiting, reading and reviewing. Glad you like it. Have a nice day. :) Rudi
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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“Couriouser and couriouser” said Alice. But, sometimes better a good question than a stale answer.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing, Delmar. :)
Floating through space and time..you take us on journey between the spaces.. those uncovered waters!
i love this write and believe that we should never stop exploring and navigating as we never know what we may find!
Awesome picture too Rudi!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you again, Sereena, for reading and reviewing my poem. :) Rudi
I always love dream themed poetry :) So mysterious and so many ways to write about them. Nightmares, good dreams, falling dreams, running dreams...I love it :) Your writing is always wonderful thank you for sharing Rudi :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you, RiverRei, for your nice words. Have a good day. :) Rudi
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Whenever we stop wondering we have stopped living. I liked reading the quiver of questions as you picked them out one by one. May your heart always rejoice in the truth you'll find. :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Moonskittles. Thanks for passing by, reading and reviewing. Have a good day. :) .. read more
Rudi: So many theories; I like the books and movies that say, we're are just an illusion. In the first stanza, great questions; I thought too the waterfall now before or after the stream is interesting, but I found myself wondering; maybe the rhyme, what's in between? 2nd stanza is thought provoking too; the old hypotheses are forever changing; so interesting too; what is consciousness anyway? Stanza 3 is beautiful; you are so talented. We are stardust aren't we? No? We are miracles. Your writing is superb. Thank you so very much. Dale

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Hello, Dale, glad to hear you. Thanks for passing by and reading my poem. Thanks also for your nice .. read more
Confuser

9 Years Ago

My pleasure; I love your poems & you're welcome!
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A wonderful journey from earth to space
Rudi your words carry readers in distant thought

Wondering and searching for truth in our cosmic world
Great job

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Nisreenaa, glad you like my poem. :) Rudi
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9 Years Ago

I always do :)
I’m floating further on some thoughts full of air
Carried by new ideas and very old hypotheses
Driven by a sigh filled with a humble prayer
Can I really wait till the end of all the other species
Wow..Rudi..this is amazing...:))

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Anne, for visiting, reading and reviewing. :) Rudi
A questions we all ask ourselves, Rudi... perhaps we spend most of our lives dreaming because the realities of the world around us become unbearable sometimes. You've captured well the twisted way our minds work from time to time and who knows where those thoughts will land. Fortunately for us, your words land sweetly on the page (in this case, on the screen) and we are able to share in your poetic observations of the world through your poetry. I felt weightless while reading this and really love the accompanying photo. Well-done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for this long review. They are really appreciated. Have a nice day, FT. :) Rudi
A wonderful deep induced message and ideea here. Gorgeous my friend:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Ana, glad to read your comment. Have a nice day. :) Rudi
Ana B.

9 Years Ago

thanks you too :)
Good description gave life to the artwork.
"Between going up and landing, there’s a gap
Where earthly time and gravity is non-existent
Where the skyline has no borders, no worldly map"
I liked the above lines. Create good thoughts and vision. Thank you my friend for sharing your outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you, John, for visiting, reading and reviewing. Glad you like it. Have a nice day. :) Rudi
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere
Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

Wingene, West-Vlaanderen, Belgium



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I'm from Belgium. English is not my native language, but I like to read English poems and books. I have written a lot of Dutch poems during the last forty years. With some of them I've got prizes in B.. more..

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