A amazing poem.
"with shades full of astonishing wonderment
on my lips open a bit or a finger upon
it reads out of the panel, acknowledgment
in the glance upon my face is drawn"
I wish I had the ability for art. Artwork tell complete story with a glance. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you, John, for visiting and reviewing. Have a good day. :) Rudi
i wish I could draw now...clean, clear, appealing...
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Drawing, painting, making poems its all a form of art, giving feelings and impressions a hard form o.. read moreDrawing, painting, making poems its all a form of art, giving feelings and impressions a hard form on a canvas or a piece of paper. Thank you, Anne, for reading and reviewing. :) Rudi
A very beautiful painting you are displaying on this beautiful canvas. I would never guess that English is not your native. Wonderful work Rudi, very talented :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you, Ana, I'm glad you like my writing. Have a good day. :) Rudi
A amazing poem.
"with shades full of astonishing wonderment
on my lips open a bit or a finger upon
it reads out of the panel, acknowledgment
in the glance upon my face is drawn"
I wish I had the ability for art. Artwork tell complete story with a glance. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you, John, for visiting and reviewing. Have a good day. :) Rudi
A moment in time, captured in wonderful colours - a glimpse into the mind of the artist. This, the picture you paint with your words, Rudi! A nice painting to accompany such words.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thanks, FT, for taking time to read and comment my poems. Glade you like them. :) Rudi
I love the way you write, always so beautiful and with fantastic imagery! this is a brilliant piece. I also love the painting.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Sereena, for passing by, reading and commenting on my poem. Glad you liked it t.. read moreThank you very much, Sereena, for passing by, reading and commenting on my poem. Glad you liked it too. :) Rudi
As a painter, I am "sitting in the shadows" of your "deepest, wandering thoughts", a picture worth a thousand words, a color with a thousand shades, a thousand tints, transparent or opaque, a thousand vibrant emotions pouring out the perfume of a painting, of turpentine, of linseed oil, a wild pine forest in the wind, a woodpecker flash, the silent song of a soul, to "light the fire in my heart", and, "in my head, no less", without a word, without the wind, without the bird, with nothing heard, a thousand times the pines, transparent or opaque, are nowhere near a poem, dear, that's like the one you're written here.
I think I now can make a new poem with the words in your comment, Lily. You describe nature so beaut.. read moreI think I now can make a new poem with the words in your comment, Lily. You describe nature so beautifully that it's a painting I know nobody can paint as it is in reality. Thank you for passing by with your words of wisdom. :) Rudi
9 Years Ago
Well, if truth be told, I started life as a painter. My father, who died when I was 11, was a painte.. read moreWell, if truth be told, I started life as a painter. My father, who died when I was 11, was a painter. Many of the pictures which accompany my poems are of my paintings - mostly the sort of abstract ones (I should notate them). Anyway, now I write instead but, my painting experience is probably why my writing is full of images. I guess your love of painting does the same for you.
9 Years Ago
Indeed, that's a fact. When I see a painting or a picture, I see a story, a poem. My stories that I .. read moreIndeed, that's a fact. When I see a painting or a picture, I see a story, a poem. My stories that I write are pieces of movie playing in my head, all I have to do is write them down (...sometimes).
:) Rudi
I'm from Belgium. English is not my native language, but I like to read English poems and books. I have written a lot of Dutch poems during the last forty years. With some of them I've got prizes in B.. more..