I believe we will pay for every action.
"a being with a soul so black as the night, his name gotten bad,
his deeds put in writing, his words seeded on the role of death,
everything he was is weighed, the sword drawn over his head,"
You create place and deadly ending. A amazing tale in the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
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9 Years Ago
Thank you, John, glad you liked it. It's alway more difficult for me (in English) if it has to rhyme.. read moreThank you, John, glad you liked it. It's alway more difficult for me (in English) if it has to rhyme. :) Rudi
selling out, selling our soul, selling our heart for material things...love finds itself on death row.
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9 Years Ago
That's right, Jacob. What goes around, comes around. Thanks for passing by and commenting. Have a f.. read moreThat's right, Jacob. What goes around, comes around. Thanks for passing by and commenting. Have a fine day. :) Rudi
Great writing Rudi.....loved every single word...the Greedy and Power hungry without a conscious is far to common in society...The title goes very well with the image and I do wish justice was blind, and the scales were equal among all humanity. Beautiful words...every single one: too many souls black as the night:
nothing will stop now the woman with the blindfold to add
to his life the last word she has, to speak justice widespread,
in favour of the working class, GUILTY, as charged, this lad.
Thank you for the RR Rudi: Just wonderful as always, so engaging...
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9 Years Ago
Thank you, Dale. This was a difficult one because it's the free translation of a Dutch poem I'm made.. read moreThank you, Dale. This was a difficult one because it's the free translation of a Dutch poem I'm made last year. It's in an Italian sonnet form and because of the rhyming and also the message of the poem I have to stay consistent with the one in Dutch. But I'm happy with it. :) Rudi
I firmly believe that we all pay for what we do in life. If we cause the tiniest wrong, we pay for it somewhere, somehow. I love the image of the Lady of Justice... she will not be duped by fancy visions... justice is blind and therefore will be carried out. A nice write sir!
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9 Years Ago
Thank you, FT, for your kind words. Really appreciated. :) Rudi
I believe we will pay for every action.
"a being with a soul so black as the night, his name gotten bad,
his deeds put in writing, his words seeded on the role of death,
everything he was is weighed, the sword drawn over his head,"
You create place and deadly ending. A amazing tale in the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you, John, glad you liked it. It's alway more difficult for me (in English) if it has to rhyme.. read moreThank you, John, glad you liked it. It's alway more difficult for me (in English) if it has to rhyme. :) Rudi
I'm from Belgium. English is not my native language, but I like to read English poems and books. I have written a lot of Dutch poems during the last forty years. With some of them I've got prizes in B.. more..