Meandering

Meandering

A Poem by Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere
"

For life and death are one, even as the river and the sea are one. Khalil Gibran

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I want to be your riverside

you, who are flowing

and moves my earth

 

let me erode

more widely

and lay in your curves

 

becoming longer

to be a desire

breaking through myself

 

till tomorrow you are

a whirlpool in the sea

drawing me

drawing me

 

drowning me.

 

© Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

09/10/2014

© 2015 Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere


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love this. love the meaning behind it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Elie Marie. :) Rudi
beautiful, I liked the echo of the repitition in the end of the poem :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Latifa, glad you liked it. Have a fine day. :) Rudi
Amazing use of words my friend.
"let me erode
more widely
and lay in your curves "
Each set of lines a vision and thoughts create. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thanks, John, glad you liked this one too. :) Rudi
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Just how true love should be: meandering through life and dying together - one swallowing the other until there is but one. A beautiful write Rudi!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you again, FT, for your nice comment. :) Rudi
love poetry at its best..."drawing me, drawing me, drowning me"

i felt the pull, the waves...just coming up for air now.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thanks, Jacob, always nice to read your words, your view on things. Glad you liked it. :) Rudi
Brilliant, love this and the photo goes perfectly with your words, you take us on a journey through the flow and curves! great write

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thanks again, Sereenoutloud, thanks for passing by, reading and reviewing. :) Rudi
sereenaoutloud

9 Years Ago

you are welcome, it was my pleasure, write so beautifully!
It is beautiful....how on earth did you get so talented? You are truly a gifted poet and writer. Unreal!! Thank you so much.....suttle and sensual. Lovely as always....Dale

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Confuser

9 Years Ago

HAAAA!!! I'm not so smart, but I have read a lot of poetry....now having said that...not much of a .. read more
Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

You too, Dale, a good evening/day with your loved ones. :) Rudi
Confuser

9 Years Ago

Thanks Rudi.....
Wow my friend I like this piece a lot, the picture just adds to the simple
but brilliant poem! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you, James. Love can be simple and still beautiful. Have a good day. :) Rudi

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Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere
Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

Wingene, West-Vlaanderen, Belgium



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I'm from Belgium. English is not my native language, but I like to read English poems and books. I have written a lot of Dutch poems during the last forty years. With some of them I've got prizes in B.. more..

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