Amazing use of words my friend.
"let me erode
more widely
and lay in your curves "
Each set of lines a vision and thoughts create. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thanks, John, glad you liked this one too. :) Rudi
It is beautiful....how on earth did you get so talented? You are truly a gifted poet and writer. Unreal!! Thank you so much.....suttle and sensual. Lovely as always....Dale
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
I'm glad you liked it. I don't know if I'm talented, all I know is that writing both poems and stori.. read moreI'm glad you liked it. I don't know if I'm talented, all I know is that writing both poems and stories makes me happy. :) Rudi
HAAAA!!! I'm not so smart, but I have read a lot of poetry....now having said that...not much of a .. read moreHAAAA!!! I'm not so smart, but I have read a lot of poetry....now having said that...not much of a betting person...however 100% positive you got whatever that is...and that is what readers love; a mystery within the layers....Dale....have a great day/evening...
9 Years Ago
You too, Dale, a good evening/day with your loved ones. :) Rudi
I'm from Belgium. English is not my native language, but I like to read English poems and books. I have written a lot of Dutch poems during the last forty years. With some of them I've got prizes in B.. more..